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for Sins on Lowered Wings

by HotaruReborn

person Seregil
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! NejiSasu!!!! *faints* This is the best story I've read in a looooooong time ^O^
........mumble....................Naruto was being an ass......mumble...........
NEJISASU RULES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
person Yersi Fanel
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn you for not finish this, you are EVIL! *sob*
person Tina
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yor story is REALLY dramtic, and i really do hope that everybody remembers their past. Especially Sasuke and Naruto. Sasuke is just being a really vulnerable, pathetic bitch. and deserve to be slapped in the face for rejecting a really good chance of him remembering his past. Why the hell can't he just frickin' accept it?!!! And then theres Naruto... he just makes me want to hurt him even more. the more he manipulates everybody, the more i hate him. i really do hope he remembers AND accepts his whole frickin' past. sorry for ranting on like that, but the characters just seems so real. their emotions are really overwhelming and has very good dialogue. i am very surpised to see that this story only has 29 reviews. i would have thought that this story would be bombarded with reviews considering how frickin' good this story is. all your chapaters are very long with just a couple of mispelled words. this is a wonderfully pieced together story and i hope you updated soon.

PS: what the hell happened to Gaara?! i hope he's okay. they better not have hurt him... i'll shut up now...
person cibiboy
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is so great I'm a naruto+sas fan for life but I can already tell this is pro going to end up nij+sas update soon
person Niiro
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this fic! I want to marry it!! O.O' maybe not..but it's still wonderful! please update sometime soon!
person June
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Every time I look at this story I am suprised at the general lack of reviews.
It's my favourite stroy on AFF!
Keep up with writing it. I hope Temari comes to her mind, allows her stronger sle fot regain control, and that Sasuke gets some action with Neji.
person yaoigirl
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, new chapter! things are getting interesting. great story so far - keep it up!
person DevilLived
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You updated! Yay....


Great chapter, very interesting. I like how all of the characters get little snippets from their pasts. Cool.

Anyways, I hope things get better soon! XD Update?
person xtaintedreflection
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is freaking awesome! Continue please; I just hope you won't terriably kill Naruto's character and make him the bad guy. I feel too many people do that and I wish they didn't because Naruto is not like that, it truly puts a damper on the story and characterization. I hope Naruto will overcome that 'something' and Sasuke and Neji get their shit straighten out. Overall, it is a great story, I like the plot! Anyways, I just think evil!Naruto is really evil... so yeah, but if that's how things are gonna be, I guess I could deal; I mean it is your story and I'll stop rambling. I just wanted to drop a reveiw and tell you I really like your story and I wish you good luck with it!

xtaintedreflection
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. I think thats the only thing I can say.. okay maybe not. I really enjoyed this story and couldnt get enough. I specially liked how it seems the roles are somewhat reversed in Naruto and Sasuke..not completely but somewhat. This is one of the bet plotlines and I look forward to reading the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

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