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Nice, although I had hoped on Hanabi being younger :p like... 15 or so ^-^

But overall a good chappie!

I'd say a Naru x Ino x TenTen chap :)

that was great and congratulations i think you have broken the all time for record for new pairings on this site
as for who the next chapter should star i was thinking it should be ino

Nice work, and peeping Jiraiya always makes any scene better. :)

Though I was sorta hoping for Hinata to walk in on them. Anyway, I'm going to cast mine for Ayame, the chick from the ramen stand. She's about the only girl still unused that I actually want to see. If for some reason you don't like that idea, then a solo Naruto/Shizune would be nice too. I always prefer a monogamous pairing over harem stuff.

I say do a tenten one she's hot/

A little short but good nevertheless!!

Though I would REALLY appreiciate it if the next chapter is Naruto and the Ramen Girl! What was her name again? Ayame?

PLEASE! I want the Ramen Girl!

INO!!

That was an awsome chapter. For the next one could you make it Hinabi. I've never actually seen one with her in it. I think it would be kinda cool. Then do Kurenai ank Tsunade.

HANABI

ok this is not a review it is a challage i like how you do your storys and i would like to ask you to cansider doing a "my colletion of bankostu/? parings bankostu being form inuyasha. i well understand if you dont like the show or have not seen it or perhaspe have a thing agaist ban. but please if you do take the challage please do not put him with any guys there are too many of them allready

here is a small list of parings
ban/kagura
ban/sango
ban/kagome
ban/older kanna
ban/older rin
and maybe you can change some of the men to weman as you did with haku in you naruto fics

thanks for lisining to a complete stranger and i wish there were more authers like you

I vote for hanabi!!!!!!!!!! Exellent story man!