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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great! I love it!
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter. Shizune is so hot, and a cool character. Update when you get the chance. "This has been your loyal servant Backlash Wave."
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice chappie keep up the good work
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES! Naruto got laid by Ramen Girl! *gives Demon God of Chaos a mountain of cookies*
Hmm...you're doing Shizune next? Awesome!!
But who will it be after her? Maybe tenten...tying Naruto to the bed while using her weapon scroll to summon sex toy after sex toy perhaps?
*looks at random staring eyes* What?
Hmm...you're doing Shizune next? Awesome!!
But who will it be after her? Maybe tenten...tying Naruto to the bed while using her weapon scroll to summon sex toy after sex toy perhaps?
*looks at random staring eyes* What?
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
all i can say is it was hot... hehehe. but it lack the action.... waiting for next chappiie ><
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lets have a tenten-naruto pairing
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice but much like you tsuanmi one.
i notice when naruto is not being dark or controled by kyuubi the girls tend to have hime come out side and then let him have their ass.
plus the fact all or nearly all the girls go along the line of not get or wanting to get pregnant. you have them all going on not wanting that even when you do a dark naruto or one controlled by kyuubi.
so maybe you could do a few dark narutos that have this happen and him dominating the girls he does it to.
plus you seem to do a lot of Tsunade, Anko, Kurenai and Tayuya. you only done yukie, hana, haku, temari, shinzune, hanabi, yugao, kin and tsunami once or twice even though you did do a hinata though you did dominate her though only using kyuubi enhanced naruto clones.
not counting ayame seeing that you just put her up, theres still ino, tenten and sakura to do even if you have naruto use tham as his fuck toys that 15 out of 18 girls that naruto has done though 14 directly one you had clones do.
you could have DARK naruto with Kyuubi-chan and one or to of the more dark girls maybe all of them barring Ino, Tenten, Sakura and Hinata and who ever else you would class slaves. have a few scenes with naruto dominating thoughs four girls maybe using tham as breeding machines.
either way you still have some of the less used girls to do and like yukie, hana, haku, temari, shinzune, hanabi, yugao, kin and tsunami you could mix them together seeing that they only have one or two showing on their own or with someone else. you seem to do a lot of tsunade than the rest.
so i hope to see some of these less used girls as well as ino, tenten, hinata and sakura appear in your stories even if it's in the roll of slave/sex slave with some pregnacy caused be naruto to these girls. maybe you could write a seprate story here with the consiquatnces from this happening, him getting the 18 girls pregnant one each chapter sex and how he copes and such seeing he would be the alpra male and not a one shot sex scenes.
i notice when naruto is not being dark or controled by kyuubi the girls tend to have hime come out side and then let him have their ass.
plus the fact all or nearly all the girls go along the line of not get or wanting to get pregnant. you have them all going on not wanting that even when you do a dark naruto or one controlled by kyuubi.
so maybe you could do a few dark narutos that have this happen and him dominating the girls he does it to.
plus you seem to do a lot of Tsunade, Anko, Kurenai and Tayuya. you only done yukie, hana, haku, temari, shinzune, hanabi, yugao, kin and tsunami once or twice even though you did do a hinata though you did dominate her though only using kyuubi enhanced naruto clones.
not counting ayame seeing that you just put her up, theres still ino, tenten and sakura to do even if you have naruto use tham as his fuck toys that 15 out of 18 girls that naruto has done though 14 directly one you had clones do.
you could have DARK naruto with Kyuubi-chan and one or to of the more dark girls maybe all of them barring Ino, Tenten, Sakura and Hinata and who ever else you would class slaves. have a few scenes with naruto dominating thoughs four girls maybe using tham as breeding machines.
either way you still have some of the less used girls to do and like yukie, hana, haku, temari, shinzune, hanabi, yugao, kin and tsunami you could mix them together seeing that they only have one or two showing on their own or with someone else. you seem to do a lot of tsunade than the rest.
so i hope to see some of these less used girls as well as ino, tenten, hinata and sakura appear in your stories even if it's in the roll of slave/sex slave with some pregnacy caused be naruto to these girls. maybe you could write a seprate story here with the consiquatnces from this happening, him getting the 18 girls pregnant one each chapter sex and how he copes and such seeing he would be the alpra male and not a one shot sex scenes.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsome stories i would like to request a pairing of naru/ino/sakura/hina/ten. Also it would be cool if you made a follow up to the lighter version of your naru/tayuya chapter.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice story, amusing end
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok first i love your storys still and i hope you coninue for a long time but to more presing matters you never even reponded to my challage so if you will i would very much like you to at lest answer it thank you
keep on writeing demon god
keep on writeing demon god