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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Plz do some of the hot filler girls like a Suzumebachi/nau/Isaribi (or that star girl)
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This just wasn't up to your usual standard. Please, if you must update more slowly if it means better quality. Could youalso not have spaces missing and random miss-spelings? The spelling is Bijuu.
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, it didn't have Anko in it but I have to say,T. And that says alot considering how much I love the idea of Anko and Naruto going at it. How in the hell do you come up with this stuff. I loved it soooo god damn much. Oh before I forget for the next chapter I'm suggesting the Tsunade and Kage Bushin thing. Update when you feel like it.
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What I said was THAT WAS THE GREATEST THING I HAVE EVER SEEN/READ. The damn thing cut off part of my review.
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think you're actually the first one to write a lot of these pairings, which I'm happy about. I suck at writing constructive critcism (not like I really have to write any), so... keep up the good work!
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't normaly say this to people but man you are Fucking awesome i mean really, you've got talent
no ones written stories like this before, yuor great, keep it up, oh and the tsunade story sounds good.
no ones written stories like this before, yuor great, keep it up, oh and the tsunade story sounds good.
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, seemed a bit short, but hey its called a one shot for a reason ^^ Hope to see the story with Tenten, but I don't think I would mind the other woman either! Keep it up!
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is a great fic and i think that u should go for the OC pairing
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how about a Tenten/Naruto/Temari that takes place durring the exams, it would be a pretty easy backdrop to use...keep it up!!! ^_^
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was a great one shot love the smutiness this could be the icha icha series you know