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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome bunch of mini fics, I really like them. However, there is one that is missing....HINATA! I DEMAND MORE HINATA! XD =P. Anyways, just had to say that. Keep up with the good work.
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw. I'm kinda disappointed. The latest chapter, Tenten, and it's so short and lacking in content.
C'mon, DGoC, you've done better than this! Give us more~!
C'mon, DGoC, you've done better than this! Give us more~!
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice update but hope to see a bit of a lighter version of TenTen and Naruto that was a bit what can you say rough and cruel in a way but none other than something new. Hope to see the new chapter and with a new girl talk to u later DGOC
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome fic between Tenten and Naruto. I was wondering if it was possible for a pairing between Tenten/Anko/Naruto? These pairing would be perfect for their personalities.
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't mind seeing Temari in the next chapter, maybe with Ino as well. Hell, you could even make a story with a Naruto/Ino/Temari/Tsunade pairing. It would be a blonde orgy.
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your writing has significantly improved. Consider haveing the next story be a Naruto/Temari pairing, maybe with a third person added in. It could be interesting.
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(chapt 28) ok. but next time try one without all the BDSM. Reading this one i felt like i wasn't reading porn but a slave fic. not the best.
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Naruto/Tenten... Hold the BDSM. I'm telling you to do eather a Temari/Naruto/Tenten or Temari/Naruto/Tayuya.
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I starting to miss the semi-uke Naruto from the earlier chapters...Kyuubi Naruto's so over-rated.
UPDATE SOON! CAN'T WAIT FOR NEW FEMALE! (please let it be the filler fish girl!)
UPDATE SOON! CAN'T WAIT FOR NEW FEMALE! (please let it be the filler fish girl!)
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know that you are not a Sakura/Ino fan but I hope you would write Ino/Sakura/Naruto or Ino/Sakura/Tsunade/Naruto or Sakura/Tsunade/Naruto story! But Naruto wouldn't use Kage Bushin and Kyubi would just play a minor role giving Naruto more stamina and so on...
Your stories so far have been very good, keep up the good job!
Please think about it!
Your stories so far have been very good, keep up the good job!
Please think about it!