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person SHAWN
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS WHOLE COLLECTION IS REALY A GREAT PEICE OF WORK.SO PLEASE KEEP UP THE GREAT JOB.
person Backlash
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was the greatest Christmas present that I have have had. I noticed that you had a little self insertion with that "some one called Demon God of Chaos" thing...... why did that sound dirty. A New Years Eve chapter would be cool, but if you can't find the time then I guess we will just have to wait for the next chapter. By the way I really look forward to the next chapter.

PS Icha Icha Paradise is the single greatest thing I have ever seen and I'm only about three fourths of the way through it. Damn that thing is a lot to read.
person wrong light
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey what ever hapend to the realy long update on the 6th? ah well i asume you will get to it but in the meantime i just gotta tell you that i love your work. honestly this is the first time ive reviewd for one of these. that being said i feel your being left deprived of some easly useable charicters. toka and isaribi from the filler arks would probubly work well for your style. i dont know if you listen to requests but if you do decied to have a look just go to you tube and look up "naruto episode 167" and just keep going tell you hit 174.
thanks ^_^
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i suggest a naruto-female sasuke
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i suggest a naruto-leader of akatsuki
person Ina-oneechan
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
um....isn't Haku a guy?
person domo
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know you said that Sakura, Ino, and Hinata pairs were out due to them being overdone, but what about one of them and their mom to add some spice to it. Or maybe something to scar Sakura and Ino for life, they find Naruto with their moms. Naruto and the Mrs. Yamanaka and Haruno.
person domo
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know the thing with dub reviewing, but I thought of an inerestin situation that you could so. I tried it, but it dint turn out so well. I think we can all agree that Hiashi seems to be the ultimate asshole, so why don't we fuck with his mental. How about Hinata and Hanabi team up to get Naruto, just to piss off Hiashi.
person XII: The Hanged Man
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dude u have got 2 do more. i looked at chapters and noticed there r still lots of girls u haven't used
heres the list of 5 females u haven't used: Ino, female ataksuki member (make up a name), sakura, hinata, Nii Yugito(two tailed cat Jinchuuriki)
if i mentioned 1 u already did then my bad.
people dont hate me 4 saying Ino, Sakura, or Hinata, since we all no those r the most used but it doesnt hurt 2 try.
person Mr.Brownstone
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot. I think those other people have a good idea. Do a Naruto/Tsume(Kiba's mom) next. You already did Shikamaru's mom. I'm still trying to figure out how you pulled that one off.

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