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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
first fic hmmmm? well, I shall congratulate you on a job very well done. aaannndd YAY! it's my fave pairing ^_^ finally a insanely yummy fic! oooohhh please, please, please update....if you are updating..... because that was just sooooo wonderfully written that I must read more. kudos and chocolate bars to you ^_^
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SSssssssmut! Dirty Kakashi! Dirty corrupted Iruka! Excellent first submission. You must post more, since practice is the only way to perfect one's craft, yes? I will offer with love one small opinion to make this review experience constructive... for me, the usage of the words 'scarecrow' and 'dolphin' within KxI smut is usually a buzzkill. And I know I'm not the only one who feels that way. It's something to keep in mind as you're writing 46 more chapters of this. ;)
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic! I was wondering if they were going to come face-to-face at the end of it. Heehee! *evilgrin*
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaannnnnnnddddd???????? then what happens, common what happens next??
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh God! I SO want more of that. I hope you continue writing about how they f*ck like bunnies in the classroom. Who need a plot? This is my kind of story.
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O!! UPDATE NOW!!! EVIL CLIFFHANGER!! please write more *cries out of frustration*
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*drools* is so good!!!!! really... its awsome... very very very very good. you write really well!!!!