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for Bunshin Pizza

by Houseki

person ladygizarme
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaaah, i completely forgot i hadn't reviewed ch 3 yet cuz when i went to review it before, my damn 'net was down afuckingain! ah, so anyway, you know i loved the ch already :p the makeout scene was awesome, and my fav from you so far, and a bit of sweeeet sasuke was great dude *hearteyes* but waaaaaah my poor gaaaaaaarrraaaaaa *cries* *sigh* well, i know it will get better (of course, with the promise of m/m/m esp. ^__~), but please write more soon girl! *cracks whip here cuz you're MIA in IM*
person MorbidHarpy
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG THAT WAS SO HOT I think this is like my new fav fic@!!!! Sasuke and naruto are sexy... XO that make out scene was the best!!! *squeal* but poor gaara.. my baby TOT *wiggles* ah.. sauske you sexy bitch XOO

you ahve awsome storys!! keep it up!! i cant wait for a new update!!! *wiggles franticly* <3 it was AWSOME
person MultifacetedTune
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a cute idea -- I love it!!! ^__^ This is very cleverly written, with excellent characterizations and descriptions; I especially enjoyed how you described the boys in the first chapter, as well as the "relationship" scene in the last one. I can't wait to find out where you take this... Keep up the good work and update ASAP, k? ^__~ Ja ne!!!
person ren
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DUDE! OMGT!!! GAARA!!!!!! i am speechless. and that doesnt happen often!!!!! (as you know) OMFTEZZIE!!! i am so ready for more!!! sugoi sugoi sugoi!!!!!
ren
person Leasan
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! And it's my favourite threesome, ne??
I really like your writing, it's so vivid I feel like I was watching a film, seriously!!
I can't wait for the next chapter so update soon! I'm really curious how they'll interact all together ^_^
person Lady_of_Gryffindor
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I'm excited! ^__^ I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
person fyredevyl
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Sasuke likes vampire novels! Now I have this image of him having a Hyde poster on his wall. You know the one....
Poor Gaara...*sniff* but I know his turn is coming up. You better give him some loving! Although crying and the hand holding??? Are they likely to do that? But I guess if you've been waiting that long for someone and you thought you lost your chance, you'd probably cry too.
Another great chapter. Keep them coming.
^_^
person matthew
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can i kill you now or later....that was great all the time i was damnit how could sasuke do that to gaara. yes sasuke is much cuter and doesnt turn into a freakish sand thing. i dont care that was good.
person Justin
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice! that was really good, you need to make more. i had to stay up a little longer to finish reading it and it was worth it. more plz! <3
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot! ah the yaoi yumminess. please continue, me likies. heh, i still wish that pizza place was around here.

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