rate_review Reviews

first one, sasunaru, was totally wangsty.. short but an appropriate length so it didn't drag the angst out tooo much- i liked it despite the *sad*

second one-LOVED it, loved the concept, even if it was the product of a half awake mind :p it totally made sense to me.. idk if that's good or not lol, but oh well.. if i'm crazy, i'm crazy for ita/sasu XD

~ lg

Uh wow. I love when authors aren't afraid to post their short (but very well-written and meaningful) drabbles. They can be just as powerful as a story with 15 chapters. I hope you'll add more to it when they come to you in the wee hours of the morning. The first was heart-wrenching, honest and real. But the second one (the concept you worked with) is very intriguing. I especially liked the imagery of the cuts under the eyes. It's something I've never thought about or read before, and I like the interpretation of the "coming to me with those eyes," even if he was talking about something else. Just love it!

*cries*

No... no, that's not a tear in my eye. dammit, i said it's not! crap, its like watching brokeback mountain. i cried for that... kinda sad, but oh well. this was really short, but a feeling like that doesn't have to be described in long detailed paragraphs for someone to understand.... i admit to the one, ONE tear in my eye. but that's all you're getting out of me! i mean it! anyway, i'll be checking out some of your other stuff.

-innerchild

ah.. i do love this - and your story, keep up the great work, eh.

I'm so glad you finally posted this here. ^^ I told you it was good. Uhm... so yeah, love it. *gnaw* Hurry up and update Watching.

Very sad story. I have to say though that I like the last two lines:

There was no Sasuke to wake up to.

And there never would be again.