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for Trapped Dolphin

by somnambulistdreams

person harumi
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh!! This is soo good! At first I thought "Kakashi´s a jerk" but then, you started to change him an show different aspects of him. Very good! And Iruka, who would think of him this way? This inner pain and everything... I really enjoyed your story and I´m anxious to read more and more!
Né, sorry for my English, It´s not my first language.
mata ato de né!
person jdauss1
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story rocks, but then you knew that already, didn't you? I really do like this story and can't wait 'til you update again! Poor Iruka...
person Anon
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story ^_^ I just wish that you would update faster....
person Serenia
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
person sadistic lover of kakairu
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ill like it better if iruka just punch kakashi face in or deeply regretingf insulting iruka. no lov 4 him unless he begs like a dog!!! im sadistic i no. i liked how kakashi got hopeful and it slammed in his face. though i LOVE KAKAIRU but i like a lil drama
person MultifacetedTune
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fantastic idea, and wonderfully done!!! I love your characterizations and descriptions, and I can't wait to find out what happens next! ^^ Keep up the good work!!!
person ruka
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this was really a wonderfull story! I sooo loved it!
Please update soon!
person Komikitty
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o_O...A...TEST?! I'd be freaking furious to.
But Kakashi DOES seem to be honestly sorry.
Maybe that counts for something.
Poor Iruka...Kakashi needs to hurry and snap him out of it!
Very well written, I look forward to another chapter!
=^_^=
person jdauss1
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing! Please keep going! I love this story! Update as soon as you can, please!
person Sirrah
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I read a fic that resembled this a while ago. It was great but so is yours... I would very much like to see where this is going and I think I must check if you have written anything else...

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