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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looks like I'm (still) the only reviewer... or reader. Whatever.
I remembered Anko's family name after reviewing last time, but since you didn't put it down (and AFAIK her hair&eye colour was black), I thought, "Whatever". Itachi/Anko huh? Hmm... I can't really see Itachi as the sub in any relationship, straight or gay, and Anko seems to be DOM all the way (she's kinda butch)... but hey, it's fanfiction, right? Still, I felt Itachi was rather OOC.
I remembered Anko's family name after reviewing last time, but since you didn't put it down (and AFAIK her hair&eye colour was black), I thought, "Whatever". Itachi/Anko huh? Hmm... I can't really see Itachi as the sub in any relationship, straight or gay, and Anko seems to be DOM all the way (she's kinda butch)... but hey, it's fanfiction, right? Still, I felt Itachi was rather OOC.
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I believe this is a pretty well-written piece of fan-fiction, but the main reason it hasn't been reviewed is because A) folks at aff.net like slash; B) the identities of the females involved are unclear, so folks are afraid it could be a possible Uchiha/OC. Personally I don't care much for slash unless it's canon (and possibly reasonable?), but OCs usually reek of Mary Sueism. In short, please explain who are the women in the fic if they are canon characters, or put an Uchiha/OC warning.