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WONDERFUL! GREAT! OMFG, I <3 IT!
[sry, i can't think of anything else *sweat*]
this story is....>.<
[althouh, i do NOT appreciate my gaara being called a slut >:D]
lol
^_^

ah ha ha!
i so hate you!
you made gaara a slut! [although him and neji making out is <3 >.<]
lol, i'm on chappy 5 right now, can't wait for more! ^^

I'm so sry!
this is like my third review T_T
my last too! *nods*
omg, finished chap 5
oooh, what's he gonna say?!
lol, i'll keep reading
email-kittykatkayla4000@yahoo.com
[can't wait until the update!] ^_^

I love this story, please please update soon, I'm dying to know what's going on and you are doing a very good job of making a bad situation bearable, you said you were trying not to focus too much on the bad stuff, I really really want to see what happens next.

Kudos to you for fighting through the new server debacle on aff. I, for one, am very very glad you did! I was very happy to be poking around and find this update. I love this story and I'm ecstatic to see an update. I have to say though that this last chapter felt a little rushed, but then again, drinking parties are kind of like that, aren't they? Oh well. I hope to see another update soon!

I'm glad you decided to continue. It was great how Gaara knew Sasuke got his own blowjob, ahhaha, two at once, WHOOP!! scary how Itachi is still alive and still causing crimes. updates soon! ^_^

This is DAMN good. I love it to pieces. -bookmarks-

I sure hope you plan to update it!! ^^

This is a great fic, and the people complaining about authors wanting praise for their work is stupid, you (I in the past) and many other people labor for free for their entertainment, it's not a book that's they've purchased that the author is getting royalties from, it's a work of pleasure, but work none the less, and reviews are the only payment you get. So if the author says reviews will make the words flow fasters that's the truth.

So about the fic,
OMG I love Gaara, at first i was Oh, good it has Gaara living in the same building and I was happy with that, then you paired him with Neji and put Gaara-chan in alsorts of cute outfits, "I mean who wears fishnet at ten in the morning?" Which that pair gets me all..bothered mentally in a good way ;)

Then I like the role that Kakashi is playing in the fic, with the questions, I'm curious as to what Naruto will say for his fantasy, and if it'll be morbid. I'm fairly sure that the blowjob at age nine counts on some level, but it got worse for Naruto with what ever happened next and I'm sure that's what you're going to tell, I'm intrigued as to HOW you're going to tell it, distanced from the event as if it doesn't matter, stuttering and all broken up with tears, some where inbetween.

Naruto's behavior is interesting to read, it's a messed up life, but i know the rule, the more you love a character, the more messed up a past you give them. in fanfics Pain/trauma=Love of character.

Sasuke, uuuuuu rape/incest how kinky...just kidding, giving them similiar but different backgrounds to make them relate is great, and the subtle/obvious connections between the people in their lives, Itachi... who it seems is still alive...I wonder what he learned from the pimps presence? Itachi bought Naruto from deadPimp several times...(twice a month for years 4-6yrs).

one thing does make me twitch...and this may seem extraordinarily weird in a story of dark/angsty themes (and subsuquently not real people, but fictional characters), but it bothers me that there is no mention of condoms being used...i know that's strange right?! and i know that you said in the first chapter (through the Pimps mouth) that Naruto had just been tested that day and come clean (but it could have been a lie) so them having sex w/o condoms...i mean prostitute! I know that theory says guys think with their dicks, but wouldn't Sasuke worry about VD? just thinking about all the ways that VDs can be passed i'm a super condom freak... but include a condom and you'd think that everyone's mind would include the process: erection--> condom--> sex/blowjob--> removal and proper disposal of used condom...

I know that it's too late to change to condoms now, unless you feel like editing every lemon scene to include them retroactively, and i frankly would rather have new chapters to revised scenes (smile)

so i hope my condom rant didn't phase you, I really do like your story and everything it's just the lack of condoms makes me twitch, something to think about in future stories, (not that it's ever too late to just condoms)... so i just wanted to share that that ONE element felt strange to me.

Sasuke a lawyer, (laughs...) Anger Management with Kakashi (who is an exellent choice, always pissing everyone off (his genin and all those waiting for him) but always seeming cool, calm and collected.

I'm psyched about the past smut with Neji and Sasuke, it just seems hot, unusual in the fact i hadn't thought of it, but very hot.

oh and I like your AU.

Wow...That was great reading.When you left the authors note about the review thing it made me a little mad.People should review to give their oppinion and advise and nothing more, not gripe about people asking for reviews.what do people expect?People write or their and the readers enjoyment and would like to know how they did.So what if ya'll ask for reviews?You do it to get their recongintion and oppinion of your story.Sorry got way off track.Awesome story.Romance mixed with angst, a perfect combination.Or I think so anyway.Yeah great job keep up the good work.Hope you update soon for to read your next great chapter.bye

I love this story! It's by far one of the best I have read. The characters are multidimensional, the plot (plotS actually as you have masterfully woven several into the story) keeps me on the edge of my seat. It's almost 5am and I have been reading nonstop. WOW! You have a gift for this and I cannot wait for the next chapter. When I read that you have about 25 chapters planned for this, I giggled maniacly with joy ~,~ Thank you and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.