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for Just another day in paradise

by arora1

person Aya
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet.
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Nice and sweet.
-hugs Itachi-
person Aya
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet.
:]
Nice and sweet.
-hugs Itachi-
person Kori Nibiki
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A nice end to a great story. Looking forward to more of you work. Ja!
person ManChesterEngland
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i was hooked from the beginning. honestly i wanted to stop reading because the angst was too much for me but then i kept with it and i have to say i LOVED it. I hope u decide to write the sequel to it. it would rock
person yan-yan
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
T_T T_T T_T TAPOS NA!? Finished already??? NWOOOHHHHHHH!!!!!!! guess I have no choice but to look forward to the ending T__T

I hope Sasuke goes to switz to visit his loving brother...
person yan-yan again
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I can't believe I've been hooked in this story since the very first chapter ^__^
I've reviewed the first chapter... as Yianne_21...
But never had time to follow up the review but I've been an ALL OUT FAN TO THIS STORY ^___^
Anyways I don't feel any need to review if all I can say is PLEASE UPDATE ^___^


I love the way your plot thickened then in the end I definitely loved the twist.
I even loved the fact that Itachi was a good guy here *__*


In fact Scratch all of that@!!!!


I'M DEFINITELY IN LOVE WITH YOUR STORY SOMUCH THAT NOW THAT IT HAS ENDED... I WANNA CRY T__T
person Sheli
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a good ending. I'm still sorry that it ended though, I'd have liked to see where it would have gone. Maybe do a sequel where they're older *hint hint*. Anyway nice going.
person Gemini
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Three words:

Best. story. ever.

This is by far the best fan fic that i have EVER read. Amazing plot, sooo much suspense, and the ending totally did not make me want to choke you (i hate when authors just end the story out of no where).

Okay, and i'll admit it, i cried at points throughout it all.

...a few times.

If you do choose to do a sequel, that'll be awesome, but the ending is excellent how it is. Either way, I'll still be checking back often for new stuff and updates to Broken.

Great Job!
person Psylocke
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*stands up and applauds* I love this fic, it's sad to see it end but what a great ending that was! ^__^ i hope you'll make a sequel, as i'm such a sucker for NaruSasu and there just ain't enough of Seme!Naruto in the world. :3
person Emma
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I dont agree with Anons review - the fact that this is NARU/Sasu is what makes you're fics great! sasuke IS bottom!!

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