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for Just another day in paradise

by arora1

person Emma
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Chapter 7 was totally great!! :O

But please, put a BIG disclaimer at the beginning of your fanfics, or AFF might delete them :'(
person Psylocke
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh...my....god... that was so heart-breaking! You pulled it off so well! *huggles Sasuke*
wow... i'm speechless.

Great job, i'm looking forward to the next chapter!
person harryhollow
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please e-mail me whenever you update soon!! I can't wait to read more and find out what happens next!!
person ky0kichi
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAHH!!HTU&#THQ#GH#@H\
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Omg! Poor Sasuke! I feel so sorry for him! >__< EE HE NEEDS A HUG! I think he needs a cuddle partner..That person...Being NARUTO! YES! AHA! ^_^

Gahrdte I can't get over this chapter! IT's so good! OH THE ANGST! -squees-

UPDATE SOON!
person Shadow Walker
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love your stories. Please write more!!!
person redfox9t
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another amazing chapter is Sasuke going to be in the same orphan as Naruto that would be great for the story. Please update soon, i'm just in love with your story its one of my favorite.
person Ravyn
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gawd I love this story~ Update soon k?
person Manda-Kun
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fanfic. But I don't think that Sasuke could have been thinking that clearly...and..well, nicely [I don't know xD] in that short amount of time. I think it would have shocked him more. You could have had more details about it. BUT! I still love this fic. <3
person bookworm51485
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was just.....wow. It's really early in the morning and I haven't slept in a while so I'm not in a state where i can write a long good review but I just wanted to say that I liked the new chapter. I was wondering how Itachi was going to come into the story and I guess that answers my question. So is he going to join the Akatsuki now like he did in the series or is he going to do something else as joining them right now doesn't seem like it would be a good idea because of the charges they will be up on. And I figure that the end of Naruto's suffering has not come yet, because once they find that charges are being filed and that they probably aren't as protected as they'd hoped they would be preeeetty pissy about it. I really want to see something from Akatsuki, though maybe you might be holding that information off to the end. I can't wait to the next chapter, I would love to see more of Naruto and what he's thinking. Because the last few chapters have been pretty much all Sasuke and he's a little weird:D And I would love to see more of what happened with Naruto. We have some of an idea but I would like to see it from his point of view. Though that would probably take a while taking into consideration all the videos that they have and the hours of torture that took place. hmmmmm yea ok I'm gonna go to sleep now because the screens a bit blurrry and its getting harder to see the screen so goodnight and good chapter and update soon.

Oh yea and are you supposed to have your disclaimer ont he first chapter or does it not matter where it is as long as its in the story?
person O.O Kenzie
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!!!!!!!!
what pain what hhow could ok nvm how coudl itachi he should have just killed himself!

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