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for Just another day in paradise

by arora1

person Kori Nibiki
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grins* God! That so kicked ass! Keep 'em coming!
person Kenz
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEA!
more more more!
PLLLLLEEEEEEAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEE
person macy
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i honestly don't know why i keep reading this fic when it makes me cry everytime I read it. *heavy sigh* ok, maybe i do know. it's really well written even though the themes disturb me and make me all queasy. I just hope things work out a little better for the two boys, especially naruto. Hah~~I have this sinking feeling in my stomach at the end of the chapter. good update in any case. :)
person Carrot
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... That was a really good chapter. Writing is definately your talent my friend. Now hurry up with the next chappy got it!! *shakes fist*
person Moon_Shadow
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to day that you have written this very well. It's a beautiful story and something I have truely enjoyed reading. I reallty love this story, and hopefully you'll update soon! Until then

~Owari
person Tac
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KYAAAAA!!! please keep updating! I love this story so much! pleasepleaseplease, more! there were a few grammatical errors but nothing that took away from the story, this is one of my fav fics of all time! keep it up, please!
person Just a reviewer!
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg this is so good!!!!!!! You should update faster! I wanna know what happens next!!!!!!!! Please update faster I know you just updated but geez this is so good I just came across from it and was like wow this is good! yay VERY GOOD STORY!
person Manda-Kun
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awws. The ending was so sweet. ; _ ; I love this fanfic. Soo emotional. The nurse is so nice too. <3 I LOVE YOU & YA FIC! <33 Poor lil Sauske&Naruto. Angst filled lives. xD
person leasan
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And yet another great chapter...damn, I'm strating to repeat myself but just can't help saying this :)
I'm always thrilled when I see this title pop up on top of aff and I'm never disappointed :)
I love the way they build trust between them, with tiny little steps they start to care and respond to each other's needs.
Like the way sasuke helped the blond in the shower, geez, so touching.
I can't wait when he learns what his aniki did to Naruto... Will it bring them even closer? I hope so.
Great work, and till the next time!!!!
person macy
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. this fic is really intense. naruto's experience, and most recently, sasuke's event are definitely heart-wrenching. i really want to hear what itachi has to say. is he just plain crazy here? hrrrm... you've done a wonderful job so far. i could really feel the characters. its a hard read (coz i could feel my heart getting puleld) but defnitely worth it. im looking forward to the next installment. thanks^^

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