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for Just another day in paradise

by arora1

person prettybeka
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg this is the saddest story i've ever read, i am so sad and i am crying. i swear. i've read sad stories before but i've never been this sad, i've been crying throughout the whole story. that is so sad to have that happen to him and he can't tell anybody so they won't take his friend, and then that stupid dumb whore out fucking the guard while he dying. omg. i am so mad/sad. this is a really good story. update soon.
person monchy
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sad fic but I love it. hope that naruto doesn't get abused as much as before.
person BballAnimeLover89
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why is Naruto always the one being raped? If Sasuke is Oorichimaru's target then shouldn't he be like...harrassing him more than Naruto? *shiver*
UPDATE SOON!!!
person BballAnimeLover89
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why is Naruto always the one being raped? If Sasuke is Oorichimaru's target then shouldn't he be like...harrassing him more than Naruto? *shiver*
UPDATE SOON!!!
person yaoisama
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story!!!! Best darkfic that I read in a while.Please continue with this story!!!Its AWESOME!!!!
person Tsuanide
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much my heart aches! I love how you portray Naruto's suffering and Sasuke's suicidal tendencies. I seriously think this story is the best story I ever read. Keep it up!
person refox9t
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a sad story, and please, I'm begging you set Gaara free. I feel like I'm going to throw up, that's how intense it is. Please update soon, and let those bastards die!
person Kenz
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a update *pout*
person Trekiael
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha shit, that was an horrible chapter. Well, that was to be expect, after all heppened, everyting couldn't go alright. I was sure Orochimaru has a lot of influence, as well as the other members of his sick community. But being raped here, so soon, with such a short time lapse, ah shit. Good thing the blood pact. I was wondering why Naruto wasen't trying to kill himself after all that happened to him, well now he did. Hope he'll talk to Sasuke, even if he won't mention his brother, I don't think he will, cause that would make Sasuke feel more bad, and he might not believe him, even after he killed his clan, but Sasuke is not stupid, I think that if he puts two and two together he'll understand that if Orochimaru, who came to his house sometimes is the rapist of Naruto, Itachi and him might be related. Well anyway, another really angsty chapter, but again very good, things are not getting better but Sasuke and Naruto are getting closer so they'll be able to fight together. Hope Orochimaru never take Sasuke to his basement, even if I have a feeling he will. Good luck!
person meep
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I swear ive reviewed this at least 5 times already but i have to tell u how much i LOVE this fic. its so well written and angsty and and perfect!! i adore it! i cant wait for the next update, hurry!

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