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for Just another day in paradise

by arora1

person diamond_princess2006
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh no... i think i'm gonna cry...is that one of the men that raped naruto? i hope he does'nt try anything
omg you must continue this fic has me at the edge of my seat !
person ladygizarme
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, this story is fucking awesome.. it is angsty beyond belief and i've had tears several times! the way you're telling each boy's story and how their individual tragedies have pulled them together like this is done really well, and it makes their strengthening unique relationship all the more believable and heartwarming yet still in character.. and now kimimaro's working at the hospital naruto's in... oh no! what will orochimaru do when he finds out what happened? will he actually come to the hospital or is kimimaro gonna do something to him? aiyiyi, but way to go for hinata taking control of the whole situation and getting things DONE!! hmm, wonder who put a stop on sasuke's care... aahhh i can't wait for the next chapter!
person Trekiael
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha shit. If Kimimaro is there, this is not good. Orochimaru really has poeple everywhere. Well, that was to be expect. I understand you wanted to cry writing that. Naruto nearly didn't make it this time. I'm not very found of Hinata but you did make her well. Sakura too. Well, in fact I hate SasuSaku and NaruHina, even if we know it will be like this in the manga. SasuNaru is my favorite pairing but I have others that I like (NejiGaara, KakaIru, ShinoKiba) and after some thinking, I came to the conclusion that SakuHina is a good one, even if I'm not too found of yuri. So, yeah, I don't know if you will do it, but the hints make me think that maybe. But it could be frienship, after all, they're just crying and hugging in a trgic moment, like girls do all the time. Anyway, I feel stupid to speak about pairing when it's not the important thing in this story, and even less in this chapter. Poor Naru-chan. I'm so afraid that the snake bastard will take him again, and with Sasuke. He doesn't deserve to die, cause it's too easy, I'm not for the death solution, no, he deserve to suffer, a lot. They all deserve to, Kabuto and Itachi too. When we see how much Sasuke feel guilty to not being able to help Naruto, and the shock he was when he "dead", how will he react when he'll know he was raped by his own brother? Good thing Sasuke punched Neji. As much as I like him, he has no right to tell him that. Put yourself in his place, prick! And I totally understand the thing about pity, I so hate it! You just want to scream them to go fuck themself and leave you the hell alone. I was surprised Naruto let Sasuke touch him so much, he may be uncomfortable after some time, but he still let him touch his torso and take him in his arms. That's good. Love this scene. Although it's sad when we know the purpose of it, it still make me warm inside. Aaah, I could take every thing of each chapter and comment of how much I like it, or hate it, but in the good way. But my review are already too long as it. So, just to tell you, tou're great, love ya, good luck, see you next!
person kenz
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
w00t Naruto is gettign better!!!!
person losthimagain
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where's the update??? I'm confused the think got my hopes up......*begens to cry* I thought I got an update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person blueinferno
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't like Sasuke/Naruto pairings...but i like your story ^^ keep up the good work cos its a hella of a plot!
person tsuki
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much!!!! Please update soon!
person Kiara
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Killer plot! I totally loved it. Please, update soon!
person ky0kichi
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg! Sasuke is so nice. I hope the surgery goes ok!!!

I wonder what people are gonna think when they see both sasuke AND naruto there.. x__X Gah.. I HATE ORICIHIMARU!! just thinkin about him makes me mad i could just FDGHRWY$##@@!!~~~ DSFDSF -slams fant in keyboard-

GAHHHH update soon ^-^
person Astra
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh wow, this chapter made me cry! seriously I had tears running down my face. I don't often read such harsh stories but yours kept me reading. Each chapter only gets better and better. Your writing is flowing much nicer in my opinion. I'm really looking foreward to reading more thank-you!

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