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Second chapter's just as good as the first, keep it up man!

I read both of the chapters of this story and I have to say that they are both amazingly well done. I have never seen the Naruto anime but I have heard good things about it. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.

Hey now i am a man of god err and well yes im sinful but i do confess and of course heed the word of the light and err stuff klike that what? priests do stuff like this too man.....how you think they get laid and stuff.....some even have families for crying out loud....of course there are the nuns...less said of that the better lol anyways i loved your update WOOT!!!! and hush now god wouldnt care for such a small thng ill just confess and bam its done

Love it so far, you've got a gift. Also I'm glad someone's doing a fic about Naruto and Sakura getting closer, I'm really tired of Naruto/Sasuke fics from the top of the search list to the bottom. Keep up the good work!

Oooh, this is nice. It seems to be a very tasteful story (for something that's on this site :p ). Can't wait to read more :)

I like it^_^ please keep going!

I like this. :) Gradual start and, unlike most lemons out there, they're not jumping in-between the sheets right from the get-go! I am a massive NaruSaku fan and like somewhat realistic stories where Sakura slowly realises deeper feelings for Naruto (just like she does throughout the manga). The mission sounds rather long and has a possibility of becoming a little monotonous, but I'm sure you will take care to keep it interesting.

Definitely keeping an eye on this!

Pretty good for your first Fan Fiction. I find it a very well chapter one and can't wait for the nexst ones to come.

I like it, so please continue! There is not nearly enough male/female fanfic pairings for Naruto. And I'm a huge fan of the Sakura/Naruto pairing. Great start, so I can't wait to see where you take this.

A couple things. I'm a little confused about some of the timeline and setting issues. Like how old are Sakura and Naruto at this point? Cause I'm not sure if this is right after they got back from bringing Tsunade...or they haven't brought her back yet? Naruto said, "I'm bringing Tsunade back to heal Sasuke." Sorry just a little confused about that.

continue this fic!

nice start it rocks man