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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Redo? No way! Its going the way I like it :D
Please continue, so what if you put in a lemon? That wont put brakes to the story and make it pwp. You can still develop drama and action after the sex lol.
Please continue, so what if you put in a lemon? That wont put brakes to the story and make it pwp. You can still develop drama and action after the sex lol.
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Had to leave another review, just awsome. Nice balrog/balor thingy, pretty cool refrence. Is this gong to be the last, or are you going to write more?
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!!!
-Chelsey-
AKA: HisBeautiful
-Chelsey-
AKA: HisBeautiful
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg dude.. u rocks!
keep this up!
keep this up!
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great character developments, good storyline, and really nice interactions. Can't wait for more!
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute. ^_^
I'll be looking forward to what you have planned for their new relationship!
I'll be looking forward to what you have planned for their new relationship!
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, bloody excellent. That chapter was executed wonderfully, thank you, I enjoyed it as much as the manga.
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it is this the ending or is there more I hope so though, I like it since it had alot of action in it and it had my favorite couple Naruto and Sakura. I do wish that more people would make more fic about them though.
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww. so cute. the kiss, the whole thing was just adorable. :)
Loved it, please do continue. One of few stories I read here on the Naruto tab.
Loved it, please do continue. One of few stories I read here on the Naruto tab.
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.5 came sooner then I expected and it was exactly what I was looking for. I was wondering how long the story was going to be since we know what sakura realized. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.