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for You Possessive Bastard!

by DogandPoo

person jade
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo is Gaara gonna make an appearance? i hope so! ooo if so can you pair him with Neji? *puppy eye* please? i love those two together...dunno why. hehehe manybe he can be visiting Neji and they hear about the rumour. hmmm i think that would upset Neji somewhat O_o angry Neji...sexay mreow. anyway this is great so far, please continue, and possibly consider my suggestion/request?
person Sukara
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFGEEE!!! A collar!!!! xD
person ky0kichi
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHAHAH! Omg! NARUTO SAID GAARA!!! -falls out of chaoir-..

I love Gaara too, but for some strange reason, I don't really like him paired with naruto..Either SAsuke or Neji. (I know it's probably wierd, so sew me!) But anyway..Rofl I thought it was funny how Kiba accidently announced him and Shino's relationship. XD

But I loved how Sasuke got all mad..Oh the glaring..I love it! And what did he do with Naruto? Did he put a collar on him or something?!?! WHAT IS IT! Don't take so long with updating damnit! -starts twitching-
person Fan
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*pounds on table* Prequel! Prequel! Prequel!

Ha- I love this fict, its just that its sort of strange reading it and not knowing the first part of the story- how they got together, how far they went. You know, the background. As it is, its kinda like walking in halfway through a movie... but its lovely, and funny, and you portray the characters perfectly! Very enjoyable.
person R
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaaay. Punishment! :F
person wicked witch
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done! though the thought of Gaara and Naruto together is enough to make me hurl. I am keeping my lunch in by assuming Naruto is going to get his, and i assume it was a collar Sasuke put on him, woot for that! S&M XD~~~~~ Hell yeah! Anywho, please hurry and update, i have been stalking this story for a while though this is my first review XD sorry!

-WW
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LoL! Thats awesome! Are you going to make a yaoi scene now? That would fit really greaat there and with your comedy that would make it even better! ^-^ Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see what happens next!

~Akira~
person Demon
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh soooo hot you have to update soon this is amazing
person Kori Nibiki
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not too bad a start. I like the possessive direction you are taking Sasuke and Naruto. Yeah, and a prequel would be very nice. Keep up the good work and am looking forward to the next installment. Ja!
person Anon
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gahhhh Update soon

Tghis is so wonderful, lol. I wonder what Sasukes gonna say? OR Is naruto gonna stop him again? >.<;;;

Or even better, will sasuke jump him, right there in front of everyone?! Muahaha

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