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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's really good so you should contiune writing it! I want to know how is Naruto going to tell the whole village that he and Sasuke are together, maybe someone caught them at action? Ne?
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK all done. Time for a new chapter now! hehe please hurry and update, and for you first lemon I think you did a great job! You could feel the passion. When I wrote my first lemon I had trouble too... they didn't get better until like the fourth or third. great job and I hope to read more soon!
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've no question. I'd like to see Neji come to Naruto and tell him "did you say MY boyfriend gave hikeys???" That'ld be so cool! I love the collar! I want one too! I can totally see that, Naruto with a collar with a Uchiha crest, wearing Uchiha pyjama bottom with a bunch of hikeys! Hilarous, make him keep it! Yeah, nothing to say, I love thios Sasuke and Naruto is really himself, everything it's cool. Please continue! Good luck! Ja ne!
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice...
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...! Awesome lemon!!! I love this story so far! I am now addicted... That WAS a really long wait fer this chapter...But, I'm happy you updated!! Don't make it a long wait this time... I just may die... Heh heh... Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon!!!
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT!! Please update soon!!!
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was...hawt! <_< xD Kakaka, Hope you update soon!!! -Adds to favorites-
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a good story udate soon realy realy soon
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it worked real well. I like this chapter a lot and think i moved the story forwards a lot too. ^_^ The next chapter should be very fun. I think naruto will tell everyone but how it the key. hehe That could be real funny!
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! I just started watching Naruto, meaning I barely knew any of the characters you just wrote about except Naruto, Iruka, Sasuke, and Sakura. Yup only people I actually know. I have to go to google images to get to picture them in the story. Kiba looked cool with his dog! This story, really just wanted me to know more and more about Naruto. Maybe I'll collect the manga. :) Anyway this is getting good. I can't wait for you to update. So please do it soon!