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damn that was good. loved it. keep up the good work and update soon.

*claps merrily* Fucking smashing. Love it. (^-^)v

Oh, ohhh, my goodness! Wow, just wow. I am speechless, ergo, I type. I am really, really impressed by this piece. It was...jeez, I just can't find the right words. It was bloody brilliant! So well-crafted, and bursting with tension and lively illustrations. I learned new words from this, I think my general syntax has improved merely because of it. It is the most original and most refreshing piece of writing I've had the privilege to read. Every scene was alluring and I just...couldn't pull away. I wish to praise you, and do all manner of things to reverence you, but I might fail at that. Goodness, me! Keep writing. Do you post elsewhere? Have you a website? I'd just love to read anything else you bring to the table. This really made my night. Thank you for it. Keep up the excellence!

That was really good. I like the imagry and word content. Do you plan to write more? If so, I look forward to them. Until then, keep up the good writing. Ja!

There's something about the style this was written in that I really like. The nigh-complete lack of dialogue actually adds something and it works because we all know that, if they had to say something to each other, in this situation it would end in insults and a ruined mood. *L*

You don't describe the physical feelings much, I noticed, but you do describe the URGES, which is just as interesting. Instead of words, they speak with actions and in that way they actually communicate better. Also, I like how you don't actually go into all the crude, smutty details. In the end, the focus is on the actions and the urges behind them instead of what body part is feeling what.

All in all, a great, drool-worthy fic. I like very much. =^.^=

oooh, that was nice. i liked it a lot. narusasu just makes me so happy inside!! good job with the fic, i liked it!!

HOMAHGOD.

Um. I love you. Because, that was, like, hot in a big way. You win. Sheer emotion seems to get me goin'. Not so much the act, ya know, but the feelings behind it. This totally did it for me. Yay. And the progression was good, all nicely paced and the like. I hope I can find more stuff written by you. ;D

Wow....That was AMAZING.

I loved the whole interaction...and the curse seal(s) being in there....

Marry me!

Congratulations on being my first review for Aff.Net, cause you deserve it <3

*stunned*

That was one of the best SasuNaru one-shots I've read in ages. Very nicely done, beautifully in character (for what the situation was) and just how you potrrayed their interaction with one another. How they fight, how they see each other--Sasuke's frame of mind. Wonderful!