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for An Important Rule

by Concha

person eardell
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGOODNESS!!!! That's Hillarious! I don't know what I was expecting but it defenately wasn't THAT!! Way to go!!! ^^
You Get my WOOOTANS!!!! Seal of approval!!
person TenshiKaitou
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha, totally kakashi! don't mind, don't mind, in fact, i think the ending is sweet! hopefully, this isn't a one-shot!
person Terry
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a hilarious ending! Please continue soon!
person RavenWings
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Falls over laughing* Oh my God! That *is* such a Kakashi line! *Snickers* I feel so sorry for the boys...
person Erika
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMAO...oh man that opens up so MANY posibilities...THat was GREAT THANKS:D
person ck
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg, that last line cracked me up and yes it is something I can imagine Kakashi saying. That was really short but sweet. Loved it.
person MMOR
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I never review but since I liked this fic so much, I just had to! I loved it, I thought it was hilarious and I agree that does sound like the type of rule Kakashi would have at a sleep over. I liked the ending very fitting, I thought the whole thing was very well written and if there were any mistakes in it I didn't notice and I usually do cause it usually really bugs me. Anyways it was a great fic, and I hope others like it as much as I did.
person The Dragon
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Oooo man and your friend's dad really has a rule like that ^___^!! Thats hilarious!! Great story, but you might want to extend it ^-^. Im sure you would have a lot of readers reading the sequel with Kakashi in the mix ^__^. Hehehehe evil, no? ^-^
person Emily Saeke
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love Kakashi's rule ~_^ Suit's him perfectly...poor Sasuke and Naruto, no fun time all by them selves... hahaha!! Get more up soon, I like this
person MultifacetedTune
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dies laughing* OMG, that is sooooooo Kakashi!!! I love it!!! ^^ I can't believe that someone's dad actually said that......I would DIE from embarrasment! Although, if he were as food looking as Kakashi................... ^___~ This was very cute -- feel free to write a sequel or continue this/whatever... I know you said that this was a one shot, but just think of the possibilities!!! (lol) ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!

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