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"it took longer to edit than I thought it would"? Why in the world would you say this? You posted this in 08/05, it is now 11/06. It took you over a year to edit the next chapter? If you are going to make excuses at least make them ligimate. "I forgot about this fanfic" or "I decided to enjoy life for a while" would be better then "it took longer to edit than I thought it would".

BAH

Nice chapter btw. I really like it.

YAY!!! Finally! This story wasn't dead!! Meow's happy!!! Continue, please!

This story was written a year ago. Why is it at the front and more importantly, why does it only have one chapter?! If it's at the front and it was written so long ago then it should only mean that it's been updated, should it not? Unless...you just edited it? Even so, why only one chapter, dammit! I WANT to read MORE!!! You have to update, can't you see?!

I'm sorry, I'm being extremely rude here but I just love this story. It's new and fresh and it has piqued my interest. Ususally I don't read a story that's only one chapter because I know I'll be highly disappointed if I find I like it but can't read on because there's no more to read! So I avoid stories that are one chapters...unless it's a [ONESHOT] and even then, I just can't be...bothered to click it.

But errm, I have to ask. Did Naruto do something to Sasuke when he went down the chambers? You know...*blushes brightly and looks at feet*...the whole erection thing. How can he get that when he hadn't seen the boy? (Naruto, I mean) And the bathroom episode, his mind provided him with an image of Naruto but I thought he only saw Kyuubi's eyes...because presumably, the dungeon -- or whatever the place was -- was dark.

Yeah, anywayz, I can't wait till you UPDATE, and not just edit. Like, add a chapter. *chuckles* I'm being demanding again but you have to know. I enjoyed reading this even if it was only one chapter. Something about the title I guess. It's kinda like, a sweet/sour thing. I loved it, I enjoyed reading it but now I'm sad because there's no more. You'll add soon, right? Pleeeease!

I want to know how the "meeting" will go on if they ever meet again and talk. Or if Sasuke will chicken out again -- ha! Wuss! Try not to make my beloved (Naruto) so...errm...him. I don't care if he's a lil' or a lot OOC (Out-of-character). I just don't like an idiotic Naruto who smiles and grins cheerily all of the time even though it's tres adorable. He should have the whole "mysterious/dark/clandestine" aura and exterior! Yeah! *getting pumped up*

I'm also wondering, if Naruto was behind bars...and not a metal door, does that mean he witnessed it when Sasuke was being tortured? And shouldn't he, at some point, had made himself known? And does Itachi know he's there? Do the guards know he's there? Has he killed any of said guards? Why is Kakashi being so...friendly if he knows he's a monster of some sort? And does the cell he's in have a bed? And how does he get fed? (Random last two questions there but whatever, still gotta know).

*A deep monotonous voice booms from a speaker*
"All will be known, tune in and find out in the next epi-uuhh-I mean chapter, of Royalty and Demons!" *theme song sounds out and fades at the end*
"Dun-dun-dun-duuuunnnnn!! Ta-na-na!"

(Oh yeah, I'm insane alright! *wink*)

Wow! I'm very impressed, that was a great first chapter. You really got me sucked in and I can't wait to read more! I hope you update soon.

Very interesting story. please update soon.

i love love love love love loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^-^

Very nice start.
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Kinda.
Mou..
Continue soon, please!

Hey! Good job!! I love the story! Please update soon!

This story is pretty cute, pretty funny, AND pretty sexy! I really hope you plan on continuing it, it sounds like it has some great posibilities! You're writing is well done as well! I enjoyed it..keep it up!

Houseki

Please continue a very interesnting and awsome story but PLEASE NO SASUSAKU IT BURNS