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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO, NO, NO !! NOT THE END!!!
Oooh, come oooon... You can't just cut this fic here!!
It's just getting really, REALLY interesting!!!
Please, pleeeeeease continue it, pleeeeeeeease!!!
Oooh, come oooon... You can't just cut this fic here!!
It's just getting really, REALLY interesting!!!
Please, pleeeeeease continue it, pleeeeeeeease!!!
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Can't wait for you to update... ^_^
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm gonna be totally serious, THAT was the hottest sex scene I've ever read. Ever. You gotta continue this...please, I beg of you.
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG I loved it, it was fucking awesome!! My fav. part was when sasuke was like "I'm not gay I'm not gay I'm not oh fuck it I am" XDDDD Update soon
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are writing more, right? I hope so, I want to know the actual answer to Naruto's question.
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this. Your descriptions were great and really made the story hot. Way to go. I hope you do more with this, because I'll definetly read it! So, keep up the good work.
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:O TBC? Yaaay! *looks forward to more of your writing*
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was beautifully wtitten. from the mission to the characters internal struggle, that was wounderful. I loved it, you are a good story teller, and a very good descriptive writer. I hope to see more from you. Keep up the good work.
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There isn't enough words to describe how much I LOVE THIS!! Sure it's a new version of 'locked in the room and they have sex', but this really hit the spot of my mind (the perveted one ^_^U ), so keep on going, I want to know what's up to next will they only have kinky sex at night or will they have a real relationship.. Ugh, I can't wait for you're next chapter!!!!
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great beginning. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I thought you did a really good job with the lemon and that it was very original. your writing is also very good and naruto and sasuke we're pretty much in character. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter.