rate_review Reviews

Firstly I just want you to know I love your writing. Your style and the writing itself! It's hard to find really good fanfic authors! Nextly...I love love love the way you're portraying Sasuke and Naruto. They're IC but not. I like it and think you're doing a wonderful job. I'm glad I found this fic and decided to read it. I have no real complaints as of yet since I think you haven't done anything wrong. Except the short chapters. :) I like long chapters but you do end them in good spots so I can't REALLY complain about that either. As for people complaining about your reviews.....screw them. As you've said. If they dont want to read them they should just move on to the next chapter. That's what I do. I like it when authors respond to my response but since I don't care to read anyone elses....I just skim ahead. No biggie. So please please PLEASE don't let a few morons ruin this for you. I can't wait for you to post the next chapter! And I don't want you to not because some people are just to stupid! Ok? Anyway keep but the excellant work!!!

*coughcoughNaruto'saclosetgaycoughcough* Wow, I must be coming down with something.

HI I REALLY, REALLY, REALLY...ETC. LIKE UR STORY PLZ CONTINUE IT SOON. I CAN GUESS AT HOW IT MUST ME HARD TO FIND THE TIME TO WRITE IT WITH ALL THE CRAP THEY MAKE U DO IN COLLEGE. LUCKLY I STILL HAVE 2 MORE YEARS OF HIGHSCHOOL. ANYWAY TRY TO FIND THE TIME TO CONTINUE THE STORY. IT'LL MAKE ME REALLY HAPPY. IF YOU DONT I'LL BE VERY DISPLEASED AND WILL STUFF MY AUNTIE BERGA'S SOCKS IN YOUR MOUTH. YOU DON'T WANT AUNTIE BERGA'S SOCKS IN YOUR MOUTH. TRUST ME.

Yay! You updated! I' ve been waiting a long time for an update! i'm gonna call my friend (who also a big fan of this story) and tell her there's a new chapter!
You really are a good writer! Hee hee, i'm, gonna continue to wait for another update!
BTW, I love how cute Sasuke is being towards Naruto. You really should keep that up! I thought for sure he was gonna be a jerk but i suppose i was wrong! IN this case though, i love being wrong!! yay!!!!

^^ Of course, another great chapter. Mwa ha ha... >.> Hey, girls do the 'oh we have to go to the bathroom' thing all the time, why not men? Nice touch there. I don't think the story seemed forced at all, by the way. I like the longer chapters as a reader, but respect your need to end it right where you want it. Honestly. ^^; I hate cliffies, but I LOVE inflicting them upon my readers. So I wouldn't ever complain about shortness of your chapters.

I am a little sad that you went with what the reviews said. ^^; I think this is your story, and you should go with it where ever you want, Uchihacest or not.

I read the first chapter of this story and absolutely fell in love with it! You've done such a good job getting into Narutos head, in my opinion. n.n I hope you write more soon!

I only have one thing to say:

O.o =^-^= =O.O=

Yay!

Please continue soon, I would REALLY like to read what happens next! Arigatou, ja!

~rachi~

so cute!! not normally a huge SasuNaru fan but damn if that wasn't cute! I loved how Itachi's attention was focused on Naruto like that (bit of an ItaNaru fanatic)

Squeal! the sweetness is overbearing! please continue~

OMG I HEART YOU SO. <333

I must say I can't find anything I do not like about this story. At. All. I do think you should make Itachi a totally creepy 'I-Want-To-Molest-My-Younger-Brother' type of person. Just because I'm a weirdo like that, bwaha. I love the way you make their relationship...real! Most people are like 'they had their first kiss, now for butt sex! yay!' But I like the way you mak them nervous and the way they fumble through everything. If I could kiss you, I totally would. Mwah!

Absoultely love it!!! And I can't wait for the next chapter (and don't worry i write even shorter chapters than you on a good day XP) but any whoo please write more!! I'm glued to my computer now, I won't be able to leave until you get the next chapter up. So please post it soon because i REALLLLLLLLLLLLYYYYYYYY need to go to the bathrom XD lol.


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