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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update! I'm really engrossed in this story. I do hope you continue soon. I'll be watching.
By they way, very well done!
rachi
By they way, very well done!
rachi
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
first off, really good story. Love it, love it. Your characterizations are fantastic. I especially love how you write Shikamaru. Any chance we can get more of that Shikamaru-Sasuke interaction? That was very funny. Also denial!Naruto (I love the opening paragraphs in Naruto POV) and NervousJittery!Naruto when Sasuke goes for the public displays of affection. As far as Itachi goes... I'm at first squicked by the idea of him with Sasuke, then decide that I could tolerate to more-than-tolerate the idea, but only if Sasuke is... fairly consensual... Does that make sense? Did I even spell that right? LOL I'd read your story anyway. It's so rare to see this degree of characterization.
Well, I'm anxiously waiting for the next installment. The link to your story is in the "WIP" folder in my favorites, so I check it every day. :) Keep up the good work!
Well, I'm anxiously waiting for the next installment. The link to your story is in the "WIP" folder in my favorites, so I check it every day. :) Keep up the good work!
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Teehee. I have been waiting a long time for this update!!! You're great!! YOU'RE GREAT!!!
I hope you enjoy writing this as much as i enjoy reading it!
Lol, first, I thought there was going to be slight ItaNaru, which I don't mind at all. Hm, uchihacest, haven't really read much of them. Well, 1 to be more exact. It wasn't that attractive...
Anyhoo,,,, I'll be patiently waiting for a lovely update!!!
-Gaki
I hope you enjoy writing this as much as i enjoy reading it!
Lol, first, I thought there was going to be slight ItaNaru, which I don't mind at all. Hm, uchihacest, haven't really read much of them. Well, 1 to be more exact. It wasn't that attractive...
Anyhoo,,,, I'll be patiently waiting for a lovely update!!!
-Gaki
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
urg! *whines* Itachi is such a biiitch! some one should beat 'im. beat him gooood. Your fic is just so cute! It is just hilariously witty! (I think I said that once before in a review, but i'll say it again cuz it's true) I forgot all about it for awhile, but I'm so glad I found it again! I really hope you get a chance to update again soon! I just love your fic! >____< oh yeah!
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it I love it I love it. Thats all i can say!!
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am sooo glad that you added another chapter. Before my computer got fries I was always checkin to see if you wrote more. I like how you describe the Naruto/Sasuke action -grin- I can just picture it as I read. Keep up the great work...I can't wait for more.... is it ready yeeettt????? - wink-.I will patiently wait for more -though the wait is killing mee!!!!- just kidding. Until next time-bye
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AH>< Oh lord oh lord, I just positively am in love with your story~loveness~ seriously!! And whatever anyone says about your story or about the fact that you answer your reviews well....its not dumb>< I do it too!! They can all go eat bananas ~lmao~ bananas>>....sorry...thats my 16 year old showing:p
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HIYA!!
Just wanted to say that I EXTREMELY love your fic!! =^^= SasukexNaruto fics are my fav *blushes*. Anyway, I totally understand how some readers review only to whine about your author notes and review reponses. The first time I posted up a fic of Inuyasha and Kagome, I got this review saying that I was a bad author and that I shouldn't consider writing a fanfic; because of that review, I deleted the story and I never posted anything up ever again for a whole year. I was seriously depressed about it but now I dont really care anymore. And I totally agree if some critism is allowed becasue it improves your writing style, just the hardcore flaming I can't accept. But enoguh about that, the minute I started reading your story, I couldn't stop. I even luaghed at the part where Naruto was asking Iruka what makes a man gay and Iruka mistaken that for someting else. Anyway, continue your story and ignore the people that complain about the littlelest things, becasue fanfictions are to pursue an author's imagination, not kill them. So keep up the inspiring and great work you have going on.
Shinda
Just wanted to say that I EXTREMELY love your fic!! =^^= SasukexNaruto fics are my fav *blushes*. Anyway, I totally understand how some readers review only to whine about your author notes and review reponses. The first time I posted up a fic of Inuyasha and Kagome, I got this review saying that I was a bad author and that I shouldn't consider writing a fanfic; because of that review, I deleted the story and I never posted anything up ever again for a whole year. I was seriously depressed about it but now I dont really care anymore. And I totally agree if some critism is allowed becasue it improves your writing style, just the hardcore flaming I can't accept. But enoguh about that, the minute I started reading your story, I couldn't stop. I even luaghed at the part where Naruto was asking Iruka what makes a man gay and Iruka mistaken that for someting else. Anyway, continue your story and ignore the people that complain about the littlelest things, becasue fanfictions are to pursue an author's imagination, not kill them. So keep up the inspiring and great work you have going on.
Shinda
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've just started reading your fic...You've got a very interesting story going on here...I was actually rather surprised that you turned the supposedly Gondaime into a murderer...He's usually a hero in naruto fics...It's actually a good explanation as to why Naruto is hated by people...Is the ItaSasu gonna be a rape?..'Coz from the stroy line, I have the impression that Sasuke is only interested in Naruto... :D
I'm gonna comment on your review responses...Now don't be mad, I'm just curious as to how you find the energy to respond to so many reviews...I mean, I tried responding to reviews once, but found it quite tedious, so I only respond to reviews now when I am in the mood...Maybe you have a secret you can share?..Because I'm pretty sure that readers like it when authors respond to their reviews...Where do you get the energy? :D
I'm gonna comment on your review responses...Now don't be mad, I'm just curious as to how you find the energy to respond to so many reviews...I mean, I tried responding to reviews once, but found it quite tedious, so I only respond to reviews now when I am in the mood...Maybe you have a secret you can share?..Because I'm pretty sure that readers like it when authors respond to their reviews...Where do you get the energy? :D
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yea!
im finally reading up on all the sasu/naru
au goodness
i have to take these in categories
and your story is very entertaining!
i would leave a longer review if i wasnt late for work already trying to finish the last chapter!
i eagerly await your updates
and i do the reviewer response too
but i just use a whole chapter at the end and mark it as the author note page
just check out one of my stories if you want to see
it makes things alot easier
but i dont mind alot of times i like the things you have to say
if i wernt speed reading then i would have read them more thoroughly
im finally reading up on all the sasu/naru
au goodness
i have to take these in categories
and your story is very entertaining!
i would leave a longer review if i wasnt late for work already trying to finish the last chapter!
i eagerly await your updates
and i do the reviewer response too
but i just use a whole chapter at the end and mark it as the author note page
just check out one of my stories if you want to see
it makes things alot easier
but i dont mind alot of times i like the things you have to say
if i wernt speed reading then i would have read them more thoroughly