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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice start!
The characters are all well done, and the plot (if a little outlandish) is well-constructed. Lookng foward to the next chapter!
The characters are all well done, and the plot (if a little outlandish) is well-constructed. Lookng foward to the next chapter!
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i thought this was a very imaginative fic and fun to read. the only thing i didn't like was that you made Iruka sound a little too guilible. please update
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was just plain awesome, you really made this, seemimgly impossible occourance, believable. A little OCC on Iruka's part but that's what fanFICTION is all about. Please update soon!
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, thats a rly wierd pairing! but it seems like it will turn out to be a rly good story!
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very good. You're making something really crazy work. And your portrayal of Tayuya is great.
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DON't open the door Iruka!! its a Pandora's BOX!! NO!! RUN!!!
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I loved this. At first I've thought "WTF, TayuyaIruka????", but when I've finished reading this chapter I've fell in love with this couple. I hope Sakon isn't going to be a happy camper and gets his ass kicked by Iruka...
update, please!!! please, please, please!!!
update, please!!! please, please, please!!!
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is pretty good, you should definitely continue it. IrukaTayuya is very noncannon, I hope to read more. I actually like Tayuya in this one!
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I feel for Tayuya. I hope she and Iruka get it on XD Then when he leaves Sakon can reprimand her :3 I'll definetly be reading the rest of this. Please update soon!