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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahahah!! i love it man XD can you please write another shikaXtema pairing. i really enjoyed it. i guess you did a great job cause it turned me on while i was reading it and the best thing is, it has humor too ^_^
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September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BRILLIANT
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, that was the funnest Shikamaru fic I've read. Great job! Haha.
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! I loved the story, especially the little surprise at the end. Shikamaru is a genius! Nicely done.
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All in the game... heh heh
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh...oh that was really good, that was witty. No I mean it, no sarcasm there! Gives a new meaning to whenever someone says Shika's always several steps ahead. ;D Perfect ending there. I really loved it. ^^
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahaha shikamaru rules
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I really like this story a lot--this is one of my favorite couples. I had some trouble following the long exchanges--it's helpful to specify who says the first speech of a long exchange and maybe even add a few "she retorted" "he said in a [insert adjective] voice" type comments to make it easier to read. I was expecting a debate about the win at the end--which way should the win be judged, but that is really needed if you want to keep this short. A fun read!
I really like this story a lot--this is one of my favorite couples. I had some trouble following the long exchanges--it's helpful to specify who says the first speech of a long exchange and maybe even add a few "she retorted" "he said in a [insert adjective] voice" type comments to make it easier to read. I was expecting a debate about the win at the end--which way should the win be judged, but that is really needed if you want to keep this short. A fun read!
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I really like this story a lot--this is one of my favorite couples. I had some trouble following the long exchanges--it's helpful to specify who says the first speech of a long exchange and maybe even add a few "she retorted" "he said in a [insert adjective] voice" type comments to make it easier to read. I was expecting a debate about the win at the end--which way should the win be judged, but that isn't really needed if you want to keep this short. A fun read!
I really like this story a lot--this is one of my favorite couples. I had some trouble following the long exchanges--it's helpful to specify who says the first speech of a long exchange and maybe even add a few "she retorted" "he said in a [insert adjective] voice" type comments to make it easier to read. I was expecting a debate about the win at the end--which way should the win be judged, but that isn't really needed if you want to keep this short. A fun read!
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Typo in the last sentence of the first version of my review--sorry! I don't know how to delete reviews. Sorry for the annoying double post/confusion--I'm new to all this.