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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not too bad so far ya know :P
I hope you'll be able to update soon, the plots is great yanno.
I hope you'll be able to update soon, the plots is great yanno.
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! New chapter!!! *dances happily* Glad to see your back, sorry to hear about your dad. Best wishes and keep strong. Hope to see more in the future. I love this fic!
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this is actually pretty good sounding. You have renew my interest in Naruto Mpregs;)
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!
that is all
that is all
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:O!!! Dude why aen't you updating this god damn story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i flicked throuh all the stories on this website and i want more of this one!! Damn this looks so awsome!!!
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh. Heh heh heh. o_________o Funny. More. I've been waiting a LOOOOOOOONG time for an update, dude/ette, wo please speed up the process.
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MWAA AHA AHAA HA HAAA HA AAH AH AH H AAAHAhAHAHAHAHAH AHHAH HAA HAA HA AHA AH AH AA c-c an't s-s-stop laughing ;WAA A HA AHAHAH HAA HAA MAAAA HA MWAA MWAAAA HAA HAAAAAA this is sooo fun write more will ya (save a child that loves yaoi and dies of laughter :write smut/lemons)
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, I LOVE this fic, but I wish you'd update it *pout* itz so kawaii ^o^ Naruto especially, all I'm hoping now is that you don't turn Naruto into a grl, some fanfictions do that and it's just not right =/ itz not yaoi if one of them becomes a grl
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I looooove your story, I love mpregs too. Please continue your story and update soon, one thing I would say is that I agree with a few other people. You should find somebody to beta your story, you have a tendency to switch tenses sometimes and there are a few grammatical problems. I would offer to be your beta but I don't think I'm good enough to be one. Also I think one characer that is a bit OOC is Tsunade, she seemed a bit too weak to me. I can't see her just giving into the Sasuke without a bit more of an argument, especially when it comes to giving up Naruto to god knows what. Anyways keep writing and update soon, it's a good story:)
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
greatest naruto story i have ever read, i love sasuke the bastard. i think that you have a very original i dea and i can't wait for the next chapter. update soon please!!!!!!!!!!
ur fan
KEL
ur fan
KEL