rate_review Reviews

u write really great stories .... do u think u can make a kakairu one? *cringes* dont hit me ... its just a request .... even if u dont do it .... dont stop writng!!! please and thank u.

i really liked this keep up the good work

<3 I love it! Keep writing, you're awesome!

I LOVE your writing. just as much as I love sasunaru <3 keep it up!

this is great is this a one shot or is there another chapter??

heheheh........I loved this second chapter except for one thing...
“You know what they call guys who get off to being touched here?”
He again rubbed against *that* spot and Naruto all but screamed into the pillow he was now squeezing the life out of in an attempt to at least feel anchored down.
“But I won’t tell, as long as you don’t do this with anyone but me.”
“Idiot!...like I co-Aahh!-...could do this...with anyonnnnne else...Its embarrass- *pant* embarrassing Ahh!”
that part, because it's like Sasuke is making Naruto feel bad about liking boys.
*frown* But except for that, it was AWESOME!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR SEME NARUTO!!!!
LOVE YA!
Kai

this was good
at least do a sequal
love your writing

gwahahha, Sasuke is such a perverted sadist! I can't believe he keep torturing poor Naruto even when he's sick...^__^;; and uke Sasu?! I'm afraid I would rather stick with SasuNaru instead...

awwwwww......that was kind of sweet.....(inner: ya right that was awesome XD) that reminds me....what's sadist?

I love you! hahahahahaha! mwah