rate_review Reviews

Good for now, waiting the next chapter to make an opinion of this story coz the plot is not really set up yet........they know each other or what??? well sex-scene are great *grin like maniac*

hope you will update soon

wee!!! hot! hot! I can't wait for the next chapters. ^^

Interesting twist, I like it! Please write more? Wait, this isn't gonna turn out like Romeo and Juliette is it?

Loved it!!!!!!! Wheeeeee! who doesn't love star-crossed lovers?? Hope you continue this wonderful fic, I can't wait to read the rest ^^

good~!

continue please?

im waiting! ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^

hells yeah! lol i love it when there are two enemies just havin the time of their life ^^;;;; too much romeo and juliet influence on me lol. But, I like it :P Write more okay lol...

opinion:
good.
Suggestion:
get them to have sex more often.
wish (aka demand):
ANOTHER CHAPTER QUICK!!! I MIGHT DIE IF THERE ISN'T ANOTHER ONE QUICKLY!!!

Hail Kisimoto-sama and the tension he writes between Naruto and Sasuke, that I like to read in bad ways.
>lmao, that's /exactly/ how /i/ say it is!

Anno sa! Anno sa! If I squint...
>so very Naruto...

Dobe, I am an Uchiha. Uchiha Sasuke
>so very Sasuke...

Sleep well, beautiful. Tomorrow I'll say this was the best dream of my life.
>aww... sniff, i love how Sasuke's allowed to be sweet to Naruto. (notice how he still calls him stupid. ^__^)

I love you! but the sex scene was pretty rushed. kinda whiplashy after /trying/ to read "Put Me Out" or something... (very draaaawn ooouut)

btw, I really like this fic. It'd be awesome to see it continued, but only if you promise not to put in any of the cliched, homo-angst that keeps popping out of nowhere. Seriously, i love Naruto. And I love sex. But... yeah... No angst, please. Just keep things simple. To be honest, you stopped at a really cool place, but it leaves alot of ends untied. Tie them up, by all means. Just not messily. (gets chills imagineing that) ^^

WOW!!! OO
I LUV UR FIC!!! PLZ CONTINUE THIS FIC!!! IT'S SO WONDERFULL!!!