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by NexusW

person Leasan
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweeeeeeeeeeeet!!!!
That's just great, really, wicked Narut is just soooo ADORABLE!
I love SasuNaru but you just made my head spin! 'cause NejiNaru is as apealing as NaruGaara...Which to chose, which to choose....I know! BOTH!!! *grins*
I love your story and that style of yours.
I can't wait for the next update!!!!
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome, I loved it.

So let me guess all three of the school's pricks are after Naruto, namely; Sasuke, Neji, and definitely Gaara if his hit shit fit was anything to go by.

Love it, Keep up the awesome work, Coolsa.
person Anon
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
have sasuke make naruto dress up like a girl for the school thing and then have all the boys go nuts for him. go naruto/neji and naruto/gaara add a little usless naruto/kiba and some naruto/shikamaru lets see naruto get all hot and sweaty
person fyredevyl
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. Neji in an Herbal Essence commercial....mmmmm.....
I loved the image of Naruto wearing Sasuke's clothes and a collar. Yummy!
Is there possibly going to be a threesome in here? That would be awesome!
I like the style of writing you have and it's really well-written. Keep up the good work!
^_^
person angel of darkness
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eeeeeee -nosebleed- i wanna see that commercial!!!!!!!!!!! lol great chappie!!! cant wait for more!!!!!
person BlacKat
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^Love the updated chappie! O.o a private commercial of Neji an dherbal shampoo :drool: I WANT TO WATCH! lol...^_^So anyways great chappie and I can't wait for the next 3 you promised in a day :P Ja ne!
person mitsune
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok that was definitely mean!!! you have to post up the next chapters soon cuase im gonna melt if you dont pls pls pls update soon! this is such a great fic i cant wait, what'll sasuke-sama do to naru-chan? i hope he "punishes" him, hehehe and i cant wait until the "herbal commercial" is aired. i hope neji faints nyahahahaha!!!!
person Cloud_Haven
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oO holy Neji in a shower....groanin...epps...down girl! erm hehe i hope Itachi shows up soon. hehe Naruto freakin out would be a funny sight. tryin to hide form two Uchidas now heheheh oh poor Naruto i almost feel sorry for him...almost!
person weeeeeeee
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i realli like this fic. xD n i realli hope u upd8 soon! xD
person blisblop
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An imaginative Sasuke,well alright,I am so happy."he stood still for a whole minute.." my fav line in chap 2.

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