rate_review Reviews

aaaawwww that was so sweet. You should continue it. I wanna know what happens next.

I thought it was about Hinata getting an abortion... but maybe I am wrong?

Either way it was quite sad, but still very good ^^

I liked the idea of 'Hinata/Sasuke' but I like Sasuke with basically anyone! Favorite character whoring!

Its good !!

Though there were points that confused me, namely the big decision, I still admire your wordcrafting abilities. You painted the scene very well, and for that I commend you. Further, I think that leaving the nature of the decision in the dark added to the feel of the story. It was a one shot. You dont need to know everything. You only need to see the moment that is put before you, and in this case, its a beautiful moment. Dispair and redemption. Yay. So yeah. Good job!

My only complaint was that Sasuke seemed a bit OOC, but it was an AU, and it was a strange situation for him to be put into anyway, so even that is forgivable.

Much luv,
Nata