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OH DEAR GOD. That was hilarious. My favourite has to be the last deleted scene. Kakashi raped them all! *grins*

Anyways, I love the dominant Naruto. Very sexy indeed. And since you mentioned it... CONTINUE! ;)

"Then Kakashi threw aside the cage and raped them all!!!! THE END!"

XDDDD Now I really need to get some psychological therapy for my poor, molested little brain.
Anyways, I love it when people make Sasuke an uke and when Naruto is a mischievous son of a bitch who likes bdsm and underage boys. Uh, what a pervert. XD

Um...okay. Keep going? Can't Sasuke sneak up on Naruto at his apartment and rape him back? I felt sorry for him not being allowed to come once when Naruto got to come twice...no wait, THREE TIMES! ...THat's really gonna turn into a wonky realtionship with boysrapingeach other for revenge for the last time they raped each other....but it suits them I think.

This is me saying that I hope my whole review posts…if it does not…I will have to try again…so bear with me…posting now!
Wow...you know...I forgot that I had even read this fic before...so I checked...and then I remembered...and it was squee...
HOORAY FOR DELETED SCENES!!!
And my goodness...you are the author/authoress(?) of one of my absolute favorite fics in the whole friggin land..."Dead Brother"...fucking congratulations! I'm in love.
Now I wonder if I should sit here and analyze every little bit that I thought was absolutely fucking hilarious, or if I should just bombard you with empty praise...I mean, I know that you would probably get a kick out of the analysis...but I’m not sure if you would like the whole copy/paste of your entire story in my review...hmm...now I’m having a battle of wills...alright...why the fuck not...it is all for love nay?
1)--"it has the logical flaw of Naruto not using his kage no bushin to free himself from the trap......." The whole scene that follows that, this is what I have to say:
I would never have caught that 'logical flaw'. You are brilliant, and that scene was equally as brilliant as well...glad you decided to add it! Though...now that I read that again...I'm confused by kage no bunshin? Was that a typo? (O.o) oh well...that actually sounds pretty cool...(love is supposed to be blind after all) 'Clone-go-away-ness'...oh yeah...that was a laugh out loud-er! Also, when I first opened it...I saw 'Chasing Naruto...' and became confused...and then I thought it was very funny...(I imagined that scene taking place in the fic entitled "Chasing Naruto" which I knew that this was not, but still, there is that word tie thing that got me...anyway, intentional or not, I chuckled...yay!)
okay...moving on then...
2) The Sakura Scene...I loved it! OMFG!!! That was soooo hilarious! And the part at the end...copy/paste again: "You know, I found Sakura. She was looking for you... calling out your name..." OMFGROFLMAO! So absolutely splendid...whatever being created you...has made me weep with joy...(TUT)<---this is me weeping...BTW...
3) every last word...makes me feel...see above...and then some... Itachi...sigh...*hearts*
4) VIOLENT SEX! Wow. I love the violent sex. So nice. *is getting very sleepy* *evil cackle*
5) The end...wait...I thought that the previous paragraph was the end...*is confused agian*...well it was a good ending...and wow! You sure do like RAPE! Rape is nice...sometimes...in the proper context of course. And when there isn't 'rasps' involved *quivers*...unless the 'rasp' is actually caused by being hoarse from screaming the name of the dominating...eh...raper(?)...gaa…tangent…sorry…
The end of this review: Wow…I am exhausted from all that…well; I hope I have brightened up your day. Your fic brightened up mine. Thanks for your time spent writing! You know you enjoyed it. I meant writing that uber fucking funny ass piece of art…not my idiot raving. It is left to be seen if I have accomplished my mission of stroking your ego enough to compel you to compose more. Go ahead! Keep going! *wink* now I’m afraid for some reason…hmmm…having a “what’s in the box” moment…
I had something to say just now…but it went away…sorry…guess I’m done then.
d(^-^)b

that was me weeping...BTW...
3) every last word...makes me feel...see above...and then some... Itachi...sigh...*hearts*
4) VIOLENT SEX! Wow. I love the violent sex. So nice. *is getting very sleepy* *evil cackle*
5) The end...wait...I thought that the previous paragraph was the end...*is confused agian*...well it was a good ending...and wow! You sure do like RAPE! Rape is nice...sometimes...in the proper context of course. And when there isn't 'rasps' involved *quivers*...unless the 'rasp' is actually caused by being hoarse from screaming the name of the dominating...eh...raper(?)...gaa…tangent…sorry…
The end of this review: Wow…I am exhausted from all that…well; I hope I have brightened up your day! Your fic brightened up mine. Thanks for your time spent writing! You know you enjoyed it. I meant writing that uber fucking funny ass piece of art…not my idiot raving. It is left to be seen if I have accomplished my mission of stroking your ego enough to compel you to compose more. Go ahead! Keep going! *wink* now I’m afraid for some reason…hmmm…having a “what’s in the box” moment…
I had something to say just now…but it went away…sorry…guess I’m done then.
d(^-^)b

Sasuke hasn't cum!He has been delightfully mauled but,its too cruel to leave him turning blue...keep going!!!

More deleted scenes if you can, this is the funniest fanfic I have read to date!

... *snicker*

Oh, thank you for that.

KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!
Just fricking funny, twirsted and sexy and geez...
Just write the next chapter, now. I mean NOW!!
Just no Sakura, pleeease *whines* Make her faint or something!

yeah keep going! kakashi rapes them all!