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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! Keep going!
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't have much constructive critizism for you, and for that I'm sorry (It really is far too early in the morning). But I did enjoy it, and I'm looking forward to future chapters! *Cheers for*
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh, what a nice start! Short for a first chapter perhaps, but it works well. Two little nit-picks would be Sensei Iruka (should be Iruka-sensei) and Sakura referring to Sasuke with the -san honorific (she uses -kun exclusively). Like I said though, those are little things. I love the bit about the ropes, and solo Sasuke is a personal favorite of mine. Anyway, looking forward to more when you get the chance. :)
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
me LIKE!!!!!!!!
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
super cool! can't wait for part two... or more. eh-heh
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting *grins widely* Hopefully it's not a one-shot? I'd love to see where you'd take this. It's ALWAYS fun to read about an angsty, horny, Naruto-obsessed Sasuke. ^_^
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am looking forward to the next chapter of this story. The pairing is absolutly to die for! Rock on Naruto and Sasuke! I wish you the best of luck. If it is at all possible, can you please send me an e-mail when you update this story?