rate_review Reviews

Sasuke does not have tannes skin,he is five years younger than Itachi so his body is immature and he has not had the advantage of Uchiha trainers like Itachi.Itachi will have to wait until he is older,he knows that.Itachi as a character is probably the most polite and well bred in the animae and in the manga,it is very out of character for him to call his BROTHER a bitch,He is indirectly insulting himself, your Itachi sounds like a stupid thug.Demanding reveiws is blackmail and this story isn't even off the ground and it is irritating me so don't continue on my behalf. If however you write to please yourself and not to get reveiws,suit yourself.

"flailing like a helpless girl",heh,sexism much?

Call me sick, but I do ^^;. The POV's seem alright, more so on Itachi's than Sasuke's.

ENCHAN!! *clings* .....Teach me everything you know! XD z0mgz, you're just damned good >> SUBMIT MORE!! SUBMIT SUBMIT SUBMIT!!! *clings and nuzzles* You're so good <3 I admire you^^

*pro-mode*
J00 ish...Okay, I said pro-mode XD You write with amazing descriptions, have an extraordinary vocabulary, you get into the character's heads well, and I'm praising you up in the sky XDD Keep up the good work, Chantie^^

~Lurve, Itheh-chan~

damn you why do you have to stop!! it was GOOD!! Please write the next chapter

I'd definately like to see a second chapter and if you decide to do more I'd like to see where you take it after that. I can't imagine Sasuke letting Itachi rape him without wanting to go after him to kill him later lol. But I thought this chapter was rather well done and I'd really enjoy what comes next.

wow i really am drawn into this story thus far and i really do hope you chose to continue its written beautifuly!