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by MistressofDragons

person moonprincess90
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow i don't know what to say. Thanks for the thanks^_^. I feel so speaicl XD! I real like the chapter. but how will you get iruka to let naruto go to the training. we all know the mother hen he is, lol. ^o^. oohh and the hints of sasu/naru that was great!! Keep up the great work.
person quichi
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! cool idea! poor naruto. sakura is acting really mean? is she gonna stay that way or wise up? i eagerly await your next update
person YJ
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wahhh!!! Nice twist!! Haha...Please update soon!!! Hmm the 2 most dangerous criminals huh.....Bad boys... Bad boys...Watcha goin' do...Watcha goin' do when they come 4 u.... Bad boys... Bad boys........... i hope there's more sasunaru....hehe...u rulz
person Shadow117
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yikes, talk about biting somebody's head off! Think you went a lil overboard on the Sakura hate(So sue me, I'm not a Sakura basher), even though it does seem like what she would do at the beginning of the actual anime/manga. But, all in all, you have done an excellent job on the entirety of it, and I commend you for that. From the way you put it, you plan on going through most of their adventure in the anime, as in going for a basis plot(E.g. Wave Country Arc with an entirely different approach), right? Anyway, great chapt and hope to see more coming soon!
person vampchic
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is seriously good. Every time I read a new chap, its got me sitting on the edge of my seat. And though it obvious that this isn't a romance fic, its fun to read the 'supposed' SasuNaru relationship. Cant wait for the next chap. Update soon kay??
person Hitomi No Ryu
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's nice to see a fanfic with an original storyline. Everyone loves when authors do something NEW!! UPDATE SOON!! PS Don't make Naruto suffer too much...
person The Daxinator
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... I wasn't sure whether I wanted to read this or not earlier--Sasuke/Sakura could have been the het pairing afterall *shudder*--but now I'm glad I did. I think you really branched out from the usual plots and I congradulate you for that and also for the fact that I didn't notice any grammatical or spelling errors. I can't wait to see what happens next. Also, Ino's reaction was pretty funny. LoL!
person alisha
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1-3 Review

Oooh now this is good and dark.....very very god imagry!!! Oooh bloody blood on top of more blood! Lol, very good.
I am much apprecaitve of this story, hope that you up date soon. I'm really into this story now! Addicted...update soon, we(The reviews) will love you soo much more if you do :P

~alisha
person kirameki
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another gem. Don't know how I missed it but I can't wait for the next chapter. Very original. It's so hard to picture a mute Naruto. o_O You wrote it so well though. Even brought tears to my eyes.
person jadeite
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story! I really like this idea of how Naruto becomes mute and am seriously looking forward to how he ends up dealing with his disability!

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