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by MistressofDragons

person blisblop
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh,I read in a reply to a reveiw the petting and sleeping in a pile would fade off.Thats a shame,its why I like this fic.Its AU anyway isn't it?Sasuke may take Itachi if Naruto helps him!That beating lead him straight to Sound I'm sure.
person Temari\'s Fan
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Soo cool! This has to be the best AU story I have read EVER! Keep writing or um...er...just keep writing! Sore wa sugoi ne! :D
person Mar
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI!
this is my first review!! ^_^;
Just wanted to tell you that I love your story!
um... other than that i really don't know what to say! heh heh
i'm waiting for MORE!!!! ^_^
well,
laters!
Mar
person no one nose
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your style of writing and the tone. The story base and the plot are stong and there are no typos. But most of all, You actually know how to parenthasize! IT'S GREAT! NO EYE STAINING FOR YOUR READERS! Just wanted to let you know your efforts are greatly appreciated.

P.S: Your fic is like pocky. It's that addictive.
person Emina
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is such a 'breath of fresh air'... I've never read a storyline like the one 'Hush' has, which makes it unique, and I love that ^^

I almost cried in the eariler chapter, with Konomaru and Naruto... so sad.

I love the wordplay and details, and how you manged to stay true to the anime's storyline even with that such drastic changes.

I can't wait until you put out another great chapter... This is probably gonna be on my 'Most Watched' List for SasuNaru fanfictions ^^

Even though you changed Sasuke's personality abit, I'm quite sure the story called for it anyway, plus, it's extremely cute ^^ I don't mind at all... what I really don't like, is a 'uke'ish Sasuke... he's OBVIOUSLY not that personality type and I hate how some put him into it.

Oh Oh! My absolute FAVORITE part. was when we all found out how much of a Yaoi fan Ino is...
omg, I was giggling so much...
I always knew Ino had potenial, aside from Stupid Sakura(she can't never take a hint and leave Sasuke alone). I was cute when Ino was spying at Sasuke and Naruto in his private spot, and she's exclaming all these things and what they were doing, saying how cute it was...

You made Ino into an awesome character, when normally people would just throw her along with every female being of Konoha into the 'Homophobic Bitch' catergory.

You rock... seriously.

Anyways
Like, I said, hope you update soon, you've done an amazing job so far ^__^
person Biokinetic
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!You updated and it was a long, beautifully written chapter. Gah, I love this, this entire story and the plot and the quiet version of Naruto and quietly worried version of Sasuke and the jealous Sakura who Naruto only wishes to have a sisterly relationship with. I can't WAIT to see how this wonderful godsend story progresses in the future chapter, or the next chapter for that matter! Update soon please.
person silverfox
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lovely chapter keep up the great work adn update soon
person vampchic
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn this fic is good. I look forward to the next chap. Things really are getting interesting. Update soon please. Love your writing skills.
person SWoD
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. It's very different and original, and written well. I can't wait to see more.
person Annoyance
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, excellent story so far. Anyways, I'm mainly just putting this in to ask if this could be in a more m/f sexual relationship. I don't mind minor m/m. Also, if you do choose for it to be m/m can you just not have anything important happen/be exchanged during that time? Thanks

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