rate_review Reviews

that was way hott! i hope ypu come out with the next one soon!

This fic is sooooooooo cool. I sincerely hope you haven't abandoned it, the cliff hanger in the end was absolutely cruel.
Updata soon ^^

This is now my #2 fave story out there... Marry me and lets have beautiful children.... jk... Love the story! Keep it up!

U cut me off! *raps Sparticus smartly over the head with rolling pin*
When's the next chapter coming? Please let it be soon! It's a really good fic, I love how you made Naruto so ... evil... (I use the term lightly)
It's awesum!

~*Kinky_ Sweetheart*~

This story is awesome! As emabarresing as it is, I still can't get over the shower. *sigh* I love a Sas'uke'. X) I throughly enjoyed your descriptions throught the entire fic, and I think you capture their feelings in this quite well.
-To the two flamers (who may not even see this. >.>) To the one above my review, how can you say that? You're the one reading this and bringing God into the matter doesn't help at all but say you're a sterotypical hypocrite who happens to be /very/ narrow minded with either nothing better to do or no life whatsoever to distract themselves with other than insulting people. (I may have just contradicted myself though...) And the way you stated everything actually made me want to laugh at you. To both, it's highly insulting to most and discriminatory to call something 'gay' if you dislike it. At least give us a better reason. Maybe a discription that could have been fixed or a place you believed they were too out of character in maybe even spelling, and an author will likely not stop writing because of you two, especially compared to the endless thousands of others who may like their work. BTW, if you mean gay in that sense, didn't you see the yaoi warning in the summary? Giving you the dignity of a response doesn't really make me better than you, but I wanted to state my mind.-
*cough* <.< Anyway, as I said earlier, I like this story alot and found no mistakes.^^ I hope you will continue writing this soon. ^_^ (sorry about responding to the flamers if it bugged you, I know you said you didn't mind flames and wanted everyone's honest opinion, but I kinda took them as an insult, sorry bout that again. ^^')
-Anonomyous fan a.k.a. Virgo's Kiss

This story sucks, its gay.

your story is so god damn gay. and your writing is teh suxor. you should seriously just give it up. right now. i hear mcdonalds is hiring. they give hiring priority to authors of homoeroticism who fail miserably at that trade. but um seriously, get off the computer and join reality for a change. it's not all judo sparring and man showers, and i think we can all agree that it seems as though your life could do with less of that. well, maybe not all of us; just those of us with functional brains. but i for one am certain that the world could most definitely do with less of your fagtronic romance novels. hey, god just called. he said if you stop writing he'll end world hunger. and he won't have to smite your ass for writing this queer garbage,

YOU NEED TO UPDATE NOW! YOU HEAR ME? UPDATE SO YOU CAN END MY TORTURE? WILL THEY OR WON'T THEY DO IT?!

Walking away eh? Poor Sasuke isn't gonna wake up alone is he? :'( I must feel a little bad for Naruto, but still!

Anywho, this is great so far. XD I love it! I almost said "live it" but I caught myself just in time. "OMG I LIVE IT! LIKE TOTALLY LIVE IT ALL THE WAY" o.o' That would confuse the shit out of me. Rofl. Yeah, so anyway, update soon!!

Wow, niceness. Haha, Sasuke is pretty cool here. I could see him acting this way, except maybe less soft.