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Yay! You fixed it ^.^

I loved this chapter! Poor little Naruto though.

It sounds like somebody insulted your writing for some reason and now you are bending over backwards to reach some meaningless goal so you can...? what? gloat?It is just some idiot guy,either he is right or wrong but it sounds like you both are.To Him;Those who can't do critique,badly..Do not discourage people from creating,are you dumb or what.get a life To writerStop prostituting your writing your self and your supporters,you already lost by cheating.Who cares what he says,it is just some guy,who cares,write,improve your writing ignore the peons,they are jealous or bitter to make such a big deal over a peice of happy making porn.Jeez.Gaaras lemon was better than A ok.I like gaaras reactions.Ok there is your reveiw as stupid as I think this is don't say I never did anything for you.Sniff

More Reviews for you! I'll review extra if you get the next chapter up quickly!!

YAY! a lemon! and what a sweet one it was...as rare as they can be...or not. Anyways I really liked it! I hope there are more to come!!heh heh Naruto being bound with sand was great. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Please, please, PLEASE fix the format. I love this story, and I WANT to read this chapter, but it's way too hard to read it! Please fix it! I'm begging you! Space the paragraphs.

Can you say yumness? That was just absoultly... yummy! Cant wait to read the next chap. Will Tsunade give Sasuke permission to search out Naruto? And how will Naruto react when he wakes up? Hurry up and write, girl! I'm waiting!!XP

I still want to meet Gaara's teddy bear, but the lemon was great, so now that they are mated it'd be more difficult fo Sasuke to laid a hand on Naruto. Hope you reack the 100 reviews soon.

Here lost complex...I see the reviews are close to 100 but a little help is needed. More feedback, just to make the review juicy. Soooo, let's think.....I have no need to see Sasuke get into Naruto's pants, but I guess the drug part can do, and then shiny knight in armor Gaara can come in just in time to save Naruto, all followed by thank you sex. But what I really want to see is a development in the story, not just sex. Your story is is great as it is, and see how you haven't reach the sex scene so I'm sure whatever follows will be as good as what you have showed us so far...lost complex out.

Yay! that was getting good! hurry and update!

not bad keep it up okey and I'll be rooting for you ^-^