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oh my, the kinkiness of this! and i absolutely luv it to bits! haha, nice lemon by the way. do update soon! the fic was addictive!

Mmmmm.....yummy!!! ^___^ I really like this story -- very interesting idea! Oh, and your characterizations and descriptions are great!!! You do have a few grammar and/or spelling problems, but nothing that can't be fixed........ ^___~ That being said, I'm volunteering to be that beta you asked for. I'm a beta for several of my friends, as well as for DeadUchiha -- just recently, though, so you'd have to read the last chapter of either "If it went this way..." or "Tease" in order to get a sence of my "beta-ing skills", lol. ^^ So let me know if you're interested, ne? Oh, and keep up the good work!!! ^___^ Ja ne!!!

This is the perfect sexual tour of leafs boys,perfect.I hope he just teases the green ones,but ,who knows ...that would be soooo strange,perhaps icky.Sasuke YES.Extra Itachi...Oh god, yes.Flash us,please. I like reading about the moves he puts on Neji,how do I seduce you,let me count the ways.Solid.

Holds up score card with a large 10 written on it. Perfect!!! -drools slightly- cant wait for more lol ^_^ im favoriting this story!!

Oh my mother fucking god! Me loves your story to bits! XD
At first, I was a little weary on how Naru-chan slept around, but I love the relationship he and Itachi shares! XP
And yes, I have come to realize, a slutty Naru-chan is also very entertaining! Keep writing!
Update soon!

that was wicked crazy a fucking loved it man naruto moves fast great chapter i am so LOVEING this fic keep up the good work some what calmly waiting for the next chapter wonder what itachi will do when he finds out about *white eyes* update soon

heres a lil r and r for you. holy cow that was an intense chapter and i loved it!!! love the way naruto's seducing the guys he meet and cant wait to see more of it. love your story and hope there'll be a bonus in the next chapter u write..hehe [eagerly waiting for next awesome chapter...lol] :P

INTERESTING..But I thought the whole falling in love thing was kinda Tabu because you know death is not a very nice thing to think about right after sex...LOL...that was GREAT Though again I hope you have some kaka/naru stuff later:D

Whoa...just...whoa... That was one helluva lemon. O_O So...good... *comes out of trance* I really love your story, slutty Naruto *thumbs up*. And even though NejiNaru isn't my favorite yaoi pairing...THAT scene just made it really high up on my list. Ne, ne - please update soon. n_n (Btw, if you still need a BETA, I'm always here. ^^ )

Love it.

So when is Itachi going to come back to get his lover?


Keep up the great work. Coolsa.