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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's excellent. and i digress, what guy would want pink hair? WOULDN'T HE JUST DYE IT? anyway, if you continue the story, email me. my email is deannathx@comcast.net
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad! Could use some touches here and there. But all around good story.
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice plot! Can't wait to see where you go with it. Keep it up and try to get another chapter going. Pretty pretty please! *puppy eyes of doom* (very cute and pleading eyes, think Puss'n'boots from Shrek, lol)
Lq
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heheeeee. Nice new chapter. Although-- once again, keep an eye on Daisuke. Don't let him turn into a leeeetle too much of a stereotype. Glad to hear you made it safely, and I enjoyed reading.
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is fun! I like the way the group is interacting, both amongst themselves and with Daisuke. I am looking forward to more.
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start. Please post more. It's interesting to read a fic that's from a different POV. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hoo, keeping the Mary Sue/Gary Stu warning in mind, I'm very interested in seeing where this one is headed. It appears to be well-written so far, and that's always good. Also, your dynamic with the characters is good, as far as I can tell, though there's not much to tell from. If ever you need a beta, I'd be happy to help for a story with potential like this; my e-mail is posted with this review, and I'm "naifun" on Livejournal as well. Cheers!
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ur fanfic seemz interestin so far lol plz write more interestin how daisuke hair is pink lol
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I feel kinda bad for him though, pink hair.....*shakes head* The poor guy is cursed! Anywho update soon, fab second chapter!
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That last line was a laugh. Looks like Naruto and Daisuke don't start with the right foot. For some reason, I get a better vibe from Daisuke in Big-bro mode than in Kick-ass-ninja mode, not that the second one is bad.
And I like your choice of pairings too.
And I like your choice of pairings too.