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person Devious Lil Devil
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really cool, but you need to space out the story some more to make it easier on the readers. a lot of people get turned off from reading a fic when it's all smushed together like that. i'm one of them but i decided to read it since it had akira and naruto in it. but, this is only a suggestion. so, keep up the good work and i'll be looking foward to your next update. ^_^
person blisblop
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh."Neither did I ,but ,now I do.",what a scrumptious little sentence,worth the whole chapter right there.Understatement can be a wonderful thing!Big smile for you.
person blisblop
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Utter strangeness!I like!Ummm,well I wanna see Sasuke/Itachi and this is a perfect opurtunity.Anyone and Itachi really,except Sakura, Ken maybe..
person faith
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha great idea!!!uke sasuke ???yeah yeah??please pretty please *o*

i love your style in writing please update soon

n__n

you rock!
person Lillyhawk
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are awsome Anna. I love all your work. I want to know whats down there. So please write about it. Keep up the awsome work.

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