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person Reina
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOAAAA O_O
KyuuNaru......*nose bleeding and drooling*

Opppsss *wipe her bleeding nose and her drool with clean cloth*

Ahem....anyway its good very good .....cant wait for the threesome part
(>.<)

and em Please Update soon I'll be waiting and I will always rooting for you ^-^

\(^o^)/ Ho~~~~~~~~












person Reina
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOAAAA O_O
KyuuNaru......*nose bleeding and drooling*

Opppsss *wipe her bleeding nose and her drool with clean cloth*

Ahem....anyway its good very good .....cant wait for the threesome part
(>.<)

and em Please Update soon I'll be waiting and I will always rooting for you ^-^

\(^o^)/ Ho~~~~~~~~












person MultifacetedTune
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*is exstatic that you updated* Yippeeeeeee!!! XDDDD Excellent chapter; well done, too, so it was worth the wait! (lol) ^^ I can't wait to "see" how you get Sasuke and Gaara toghether -- should be lots of fun, ne? ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!
person Saito
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say that was one of the best chapters yet.
I really enjoyed how you pieced it all together, and how an explanation was given as to Naruto's sexual attention from the others.

Very good work, Belle. :)
person ky0kichi
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes yes. I loved this chapter..Both times I read it! It's so wonderful and I can't wait for the next chapter. This stuff is getting better and better! And your writing is great! Weee!! -is all excited and stuff- I'm not gonna give you a moment of peace until you put up the next chapter! Muahaha *Shakes fist viciously* I'm determined! Muaha! :PPP~~

And I hope you continue to rely on me as much as you need too! You're hella fun to talk to! Hehe update soon >:D
person Midori Tachibana
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my GOD!!!!

That thing about the tress was an excellent on-liner! That was soooo something Naruto would say!!

Please write more, just keep one thing in mind. I love Naruto, Sasuke, and Gaara. I have plushies of them and when I read fanfics where they get hurt I go home and cuddle them. So please try to be nice so I don't have to make up for it. TT-TT

Midori
person Adri
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON!!!
person Angel of Darkness
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-glomps- its bout time lol luv the chappie specially kyu/naru ^_^ what is up with the trees? i wana know also lol... cant wait for more!!! poor gaara he was stood up >.< me luv gaara/naru pairings theres so little of them
person blisblop
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke will do "anything for him?",oh good god,I hope its be a triad with Gaara and Naruto!Its was better writinG and very hot.The only flaw was the use of the word "withered" ,that means dried and shriveled,I think you are thinking of "writhed "which means to twist and stretch repeatedly.Thaank you.
person Blood
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grin* he'll b in good hands, but not Jiraiya's..

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