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by chy

person Indy
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy frick- this is SUCH a great story! Being a total Gaara fan that was the reason I started reading this but Oh.My.God. I am hooked. Everythign about this story kicks ass! THis has totally captured my attetntion and I cant WAIT till you update!!!! Err- I have a question... just maybe- maybe not saying you gotta but could you email me when you update? Its really hard for me to keep up with all the updates for the storys I read and this is one I def-in-it-ly! want to keep in line with. I REALLLY cant wait for a threesome!!!! *squeels* I have no clue how long or how your going to do this but all I gotta say is you'll do it and you'll do it your way... the good way. UPDATE PLLLLEASSSSSSSSSSSSE
person Alisha
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Review of Chapter 13:

WOOTNESS!
I was very surprised with the Kyuubi scene...you made it ...hot though so yay!!!! Go blood...ooo precious blood..
Hehe pheromones.....sweet pheromones to entice the 3-some!! WOOTT!!
Thank you ever so much for the update!
I shall review more later when you update again ^^
Ja Ne until then!!
~alisha
person chris
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ak;dsfhrie, continue..... ;___; I'm dying here.
Uhm.. The part with the Kyuubi.. isn't that technally considered bestiallity? But you said he had hands, so i got a confoozed

Lalala~ I'm kinda tipsy atm.. ploby have to read this again lattteeerezzzzzzzz..........
person yurathewicked
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, i think this is one of the best yaoi fanfics ive read in a while. why? three reasons: 1) the lemons are amazing 2) the lemons are frequent 3) sasugaaranaru is totally in the works. Please continue!
person Billy
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Away for a while but back now.
Very clever, Naruto W/ Kuubi... Don't really like the pairing to much but I liked that.
Let me guess Jiraiya will be mostly watching, but what he does tell and teach them is ...... oh, how shall I say it?.........

SEXY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He ^___________^
-Billy
person ^^
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh yay! i am sensing a threesome! *licks lips*
person Drisowen
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. This is a great story! I love the way you write too. Please update! ^^
person magikphoenix
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!! I totaly love your story. I can't wait to find out what happned next. Please update soon.
person Anbu Captain
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Wow... so many hot bishies... *melts* Please, for my sanity, continue the wondeful story! Keep up th wonderful writing.
person roni
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah yes, cant forget the trees xDD finally you updated! i didnt think you EVER would!!

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