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by chy

person Shingo the Pest
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you're really rolling out the chapters quickly!
person angel of darkness
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hooray! go garanaru!! lol this is geting interesting cant wait for next chappie!! great job1!
person kai
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update!! now update some more! XDD Let's see how sasuke handles everything!! XD
person Horizont
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jiraiya rocks! I grew to like him during the last episodes, but you made him even better! XD
I don't know why, but I really like Sasuke and Naruto together in this fic (not that I'd mind a 3some)... I usually prefer more creative pairings and Gaara is one of my favs... oh can't he feel just a tiny little bit attracted to Sasuke...? *thinks this is a good idea*
...*sueeel* g2g, got an insect in my room!
person rhichan
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O M G
Please update!~ Great man just great.
I love ittttt!! Its got that sexi and funny
appeal to it x.x;; very good Idea also!
Ooho and like In his dreams, for some reason
my mind keeps telling me that its Kyuubi!
I dont know why but, yeah xD! Omg I cant
wait too see what what happens with Gaara
and Sasuke! Three'some OMG no no no wait!~
That would be very... lovely.. Rofl
Well see ya next update!
N'hope you have fun writing it as much
as we enjoy reading it! Jaa
xo rhichan xo
person Billy
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it keep up the oh to well loved work!!!!
- Billy ^________________________________________________________________^"
person Nesikin
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Jiraya...XD!!!! Love his inclusion in this. "Shoulda brought my camera"...that is just so HIM it's scary. I really like this story so far, there's an actual story going on...and that in itself is nice. Now more writing!! lol

I know I said it before, but since I love the pairing: more Gaara/Naruto yes? ::big sad puppy eyes:: Yes yes? lol Or hell, why not the inevitable Sasuke/Gaara/Naruto threesome. Oh I KNOW it's going to happen...oh I just know it.

Seriously though, you're doing great! Keep it up!!

-Nesi
person Kawaikyuubi
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want Three sum and i want it now! T^T The three hottest shinobi going at it all at the same time in one bed! DUDE! Who wouldnt want that! Update ssooooooooonnnn...................
...........Nice fic by the way, keep it up
person Sukara
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo! ;-; NAruto is suppose to like Sasuke...Sasuke... *Chants his name over and over again*
person Gingitsune
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Another chapter. Well at least now Naruto know what is going on with his body. I'm also glad that Sasuke knows about Kyuubi now. =) Hehehe you know that I'm pitching for a threesome. Since Naruto likes both Sasuke and Gaara and they in turn like him, heheh they just have to learn how to share! Lol. More onegai?

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