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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice nice ^^... Yes, I forgot about the trees... wonder what Kyuubi said about it, hahaha. After Kyuubi gave Naruto an idea of how to get both of them in bed, I was like... YES the threesome, it's coming!! Then the chapter ended w/ Jiraiya and Tsunade talking XD. Nooooooo. *waits for the next chapter*
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EGADS!! Amazing work once again~! I wonder what'll happen later... will Itachi and Kisame appear?
*laughs evilly* or shall other people come? *coughs* like.. Neji? Maybe????? Shino??? I dunno!!!!
All I know is that this is REALLY good and I wonder how Naruto will form the threesome....
In my opinion, he'd probably tell both of them that he can't choose... that he wants them both....
But how... I wonder... PLEASE UPDATE SOON~! And don't forget to tell me XDDD My gods this is GOOD!!!
*laughs evilly* or shall other people come? *coughs* like.. Neji? Maybe????? Shino??? I dunno!!!!
All I know is that this is REALLY good and I wonder how Naruto will form the threesome....
In my opinion, he'd probably tell both of them that he can't choose... that he wants them both....
But how... I wonder... PLEASE UPDATE SOON~! And don't forget to tell me XDDD My gods this is GOOD!!!
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm the lemons do help but besides that it does seem like your writings improving. You could always get a reader to look over it for you *hint* *hint* Well in others words, please update! I love your fanfic!
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are an excelent writer, and I look forward to future chapers!
Keep up the good work!
--Saito
Keep up the good work!
--Saito
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mouuuuuuuu. Weren't you supposed to have a deadline young lady? :(
Updateeeeee ;____;.
And youy need to get on msn more so we can have conversations about multiple naruto pairings. heheh ^_^
Updateeeeee ;____;.
And youy need to get on msn more so we can have conversations about multiple naruto pairings. heheh ^_^
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wee~! Yay.. anything at all.. threesome with gaara, yes?
As for you're writing, you are very skilled in that department. Lemons would be perpetually boring if not writen by people with skill, which you have. Your writing has improved very much since you first stared, and you still have room for lots of improvement.
Also, remember, if a lemon is not writen well, it is boring. People don't only read your stuff because of them. ^___^ <33333
chris
As for you're writing, you are very skilled in that department. Lemons would be perpetually boring if not writen by people with skill, which you have. Your writing has improved very much since you first stared, and you still have room for lots of improvement.
Also, remember, if a lemon is not writen well, it is boring. People don't only read your stuff because of them. ^___^ <33333
chris
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WoW ...........
thats all I can say for now *is drooling*
ahem anyway *pulls up a banner* I want more I want more
hee hee *smile *
thats all I can say for now *is drooling*
ahem anyway *pulls up a banner* I want more I want more
hee hee *smile *
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Review of Chapter 12
"Yes, he would do anything his dobe ever wanted of him. Anything at all."-----I'm hoping that anything is 3 some with Gaara lol.
No no I like your writing, and not just becusae of the lemons....but oh the lemons of greatness though!! XD Heh it was a loooong and ......hott lemon, but oh so juicy ^^
Errr fine will shut up about your ammazing lemons!
Oh btw, you are the lemon queen, NO ONE can take that tilte away from you!! HEHE!
...
:)
"Yes, he would do anything his dobe ever wanted of him. Anything at all."-----I'm hoping that anything is 3 some with Gaara lol.
No no I like your writing, and not just becusae of the lemons....but oh the lemons of greatness though!! XD Heh it was a loooong and ......hott lemon, but oh so juicy ^^
Errr fine will shut up about your ammazing lemons!
Oh btw, you are the lemon queen, NO ONE can take that tilte away from you!! HEHE!
...
:)
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG MORE!!!!!! *DROOOOOLS*
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:: nudge, nudge ::
Hey! This is good please write more!
:: nudge, nudge ::
I'll review more if you do!
P.S. Ever thought of actually having Gaara and Sasuke, yah know (blushes) "teaming up"? I see a possiblitily of it but Man it feels so wrong saying that! No so much the couple as your the writer. I should be telling you what to do! Ah well, go write more, your doing fine. Just please let somebody down softly if you go that route.
Love yah!
Midori ^-^
Hey! This is good please write more!
:: nudge, nudge ::
I'll review more if you do!
P.S. Ever thought of actually having Gaara and Sasuke, yah know (blushes) "teaming up"? I see a possiblitily of it but Man it feels so wrong saying that! No so much the couple as your the writer. I should be telling you what to do! Ah well, go write more, your doing fine. Just please let somebody down softly if you go that route.
Love yah!
Midori ^-^