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by Sukara

person T.K-kun
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a really interesting story and great plot! =D you do need some spelling and
grammar improments. other then that, it's goin' good. =D update soon!
person Setsu
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kyaaaaa That was too cute at the end! XD I can't wait to see what happen's. What are they gona do to poor Naruto? Heh what is Naruto going to do to the poor gang is a better question :P Are people going to be after Naruto? Is their going to be an explination as to why Naruto wants to join the gang? Who was the other gang? ^.^ Kya I can't wait up date soon please! This is great so far you write well. Ja till next chap!
person Uizu
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uuuu... Intresting... pleas update soon !! xDD

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