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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cracks up* LMAO, that was sooooooo funny!!! ^___^ I think I liked this one more than the "first" one, but the first one -did- seem to have more humor and flow a bit better, for some reason. Maybe because it was shorter, as you pointed out. Either way, they -are- very different, but they are also great "companion" poems, and both are quite enjoyable and well done!!! ^___^ Oh, and I have a suggestion for you... (take this with a grain of salt and don't worry about "hurting my feelings" if you don't like it, k?) Here it is: even though Naruto is the strongest ninja, it's common knowledge that he's pissed off many a person (both in the manga -and- in the story line). So what if a group of them get together and "teach him a lesson"? I'm thinking Sasuke and Gaara...and maybe Neiji, too............. *evil, perverted grin* ^___~ Ah, well, like a said, it's just a suggestion....... ^^ Keep up the good work!!!